The Thief

THE THIEF © RAJAT KANTI CHAKRABARTY 11/01/2014 Thief entered my wife's bedroom Moonbird reported that and slipped behind a bush I was shivering in cold rain legs sore

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/1/2014 11:52:00 PM

hahaha. This is very humorous!!! Moonbird indeed. Am I seeing something different than the poets responding below??

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 11/2/2014 1:39:00 AM

Thank you Andrea. Humorous indeed! But what about" I was shivering in cold rain legs sore"? LOVE::::rajat

Gary Bateman

Date: 11/1/2014 8:02:00 AM

Hello Rajat, A great depiction of this event. I hope the authorities apprehend this thief. Have a great weekend my good friend -- and do stay in touch!! Cheers, Gary

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 11/1/2014 8:49:00 AM

Thank you Gary for your comments. Love.:::::: rajat

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 11/1/2014 4:09:00 AM

I wish that the cops had apprehend that criminal. Pity that he fled. Very creative poem, Rajat! ;) thank you for visiting my page and very sweet, kind comment. You're very sweet my dear friend Rajat. The same wishes I send to you! :) xxxx D.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 11/1/2014 4:22:00 AM

Thank you D for your comments. Love .....rajat