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The Thaw of Spring

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Grass stalks rise upward. to a head of fading gold Their wings were fully spread. a cerulean cape, The morning smoke blows. The willow tree was still drenched. with lengthy icicles akin Cat's whiskers Daffodil drums sing an ode. a parade in the clearing dew on strewn gossamer akin a wedding veil Dawn weeps crimson tears. and I'm just a whim to embrace the richness of the dawn as fresh as a chew from a crisp apple Rivers trickle under the branches. Crocus blossoms in the melting snow soiling their newly opened purple heads dribble, dribble, dribble Cherry blossoms burst open in my heart. as young ducks. velvet of a sunny yellow hue. glide across the smooth lagoon. Disposing of hatching eggs of translucent porcelain. an obvious awakening that appeared would never happen.
Written: February 26, 2023 Your Option Again Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 2/26/2023 1:31:00 PM
- Spring is a beautiful parade, Las ... "sprayed with muck" ... I hope you mean when the farmer to spread the muck on the ground ... the smell that follows you in days :))) ... but does well for the earth's growths - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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