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The Tetrasienka Herder To His Love

In my vessel below Europa seas Pardoning my telepathy- You see, I am too far below to reach out to you in our minds As lovers do. I envision our green skin sticking together, communicating from within. I am but a mere herder of these wretched undersea creatures These Tetrasienka, giant peaceful beasts- Which I would happily give you In a quiet reunion, then a fanciful feast. When my tour is finished- in 10,000 light years, Perhaps we shall walk on Jupiter, holding webs, staring at a place called Earth. My Love, when done herding these Tetrasienka, from the deep I will come to you... In my vessel from below the Europa seas Perhaps we may try a thing called birth- but only if you please. * Europa is a moon of Jupiter, with known oceans and hot wells deep in the ocean, life is expected to thrive there. And the "Tetrasienka" is my version of a whale-like creature living there. 9th place in the "Parody" contest by Dr. Ram Mehta

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Date: 6/6/2010 4:15:00 AM
So many realms in this write- Congrats Amy
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Date: 6/5/2010 9:32:00 AM
Such an unusual and clever twist to the contest, Amy!! Congratulations on your win !!!! :) Love, Carrie
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Date: 6/5/2010 8:57:00 AM
What a very interesting entry. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/5/2010 5:46:00 AM
Congrats Amy on your winning poem in the Parody contest with this exquisite write which I think I missed before to comment on.. so now enjoy your wonderful win so well deserved.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 6/5/2010 2:56:00 AM
Congrats on the win and thanks for the support
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Date: 5/18/2010 4:13:00 AM
It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning Amy. The best to you in the contest. I hope you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love,Carol
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Date: 5/18/2010 12:40:00 AM
Imaginative, and totally engrossing!
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Date: 5/17/2010 6:04:00 PM
Thanks for supporting my contest
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Date: 5/17/2010 4:43:00 PM
Great imagination in this one and imagination is the greatest nation on the earth...Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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