Notes About The Poem

The Tea Party

As I step on the threshold through a dense cloud of dust there's a moment I'm swept back, walking deep into trust To the arms of a childhood that never grows old and where the cold of an attic, is warmed by the past I remember the sun, and the man in the moon and the sandman who comes on a hot afternoon I remember small teeth, tucked under pillows, a dime and a wish, and a doll by the window There's a world under oils, and a friend to play house What brims with contentment, and worries are few a delicate balance of color and hue The old man, the child,… whoever they are in a moment so charming, of sweet tapestry A bewildering childhood, beguiling, the view on the doorstep of daydreams, with a small cup of tea A flight of the fancy, in ginger-ale eyes unfolds all the flowers, of 'let's pretend' rhymes I navigate hallways, and warm afternoons for I am the grandchild, and he is the moon The dance of the tea-cups, the fairyland shelves I've entered a time-warp in spite of myself The love of all love, is an old man who shares a small cup of tea, filled of vaporized air As light as a feather, the world in our arms sipping on tea in a world without harm
~ The Painting : "If Wrinkles Must Be Written On Our Brow Let Them Not Be Written" Painting By Morgan Weistling 5/6/16 Contest: Within A Gilded Frame Sponsor: Broken Wings
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Rycroft Avatar
June 7, 2016 at 9:08 AM
A bit late but congrats x
Makama Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 6:45 AM
Awesome and refreshing. A jaw breaking 7.
Smith Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 11:58 AM
Deserving win Carrie, congratulations...
Chansarkar Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 9:43 AM
So enchanting,congrats Carrie!
Inman Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 9:36 AM
Absolutely lovely Carrie, it is such a gentle imaginative write that reads very smoothly.
A   Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 2:23 AM
Carrie, Congratulations on your awesome win, in Broken Wing's contest... LINDA
Misra Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 1:56 AM
Very beautiful poem on the pic. Congrats on your great win, Carrie.
Misra Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 1:58 AM
And thank you for introducing me to Ekphrasis!
Pennell  Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 1:05 AM
lovely write and a nice pic congrats
Roper Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 11:19 PM
Lovely write, Carrie, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
Godwin Avatar
May 6, 2016 at 11:35 PM
Love this beautiful, soft-caressing and touching poem. Excellent ...7 ... CayCay
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 6, 2016 at 1:05 PM
Carrie, you have captured the essence of love between a grandfather and granddaughter in this charming painting, so wonderfully. This is sure to do well in the contest. I don't know your exact birthday, but I know it is sometime this month of May, so I want to wish you the happiest of birthdays my friend! #7 ; ) Love, Connie
Richards Avatar
May 6, 2016 at 1:09 PM
Omy goodness.....what a keen memory you have, dear Connie! Thank you so much for remembering, and always especially for your kindness and kind comments! Thank you !!
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace