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The Taste of Wits

Love is a word , sung by the arts , with no blood and life , attracts every heart, love in the sense , attract a great Mozart , making itself fake , at last , like a dart . It starts to hate , hate the brut star , the reason of your wounds , the pain of those scars , triumph leads to life , but disaster leads to war , know you the reason , why am I so far . I have seen love , from the time of birth , having faces of - joy and mirth , tasting a bit - the taste of joy , tasting milk or bars , whether a girl or a boy. Whom shall I tell , the story to share , taste it by every buds , but even take care , love seems very sweet , but bitter after its taste , bitter makes it very hard , life in waste .

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Date: 5/28/2014 5:57:00 AM
Interesting and creative. Congrats on your poem being featured this week,
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Date: 5/7/2014 9:07:00 PM
hello SKAT !!! I am very thankful to you for welcoming me to poetry soup. I felt a bit nervous before composing and yes , before posting them. But now I can feel what exactly poetry exists with. Its just creativity, composition and finally , ENCOURAGEMENT , which makes a poetry roar like a lion . I thank you again from the bottom of my heart and promise to be in touch with poetry with you all loving friends . >.>from Mohammed @To my new Poet friend SKAT@ <<<
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Date: 5/7/2014 3:28:00 PM
Mohammed, impressive first poem., Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 5/7/2014 10:55:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Mohammed :) - I choose your first good written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/7/2014 5:42:00 AM
Thanks a lot from the bottom of my heart , for supporting and encouraging me . I liked reading your poems , and they very deeply embedded in my heart. I hope we will be sharing our works among each other. Best of luck Poet LINDA .@ >> From your new poet friend Mohammed.@<<
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Date: 5/6/2014 11:49:00 PM
Hello Mohammed, this is very deep... , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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