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The Tank On empty, we drove on. There was no place to stop anyway. We got in the car before dawn, the kids in the back seat. the dog with them. “Good girl, good girl” stayed silent. She knew… Pocket money tight, But mom said, “get to the border.” Pa will come for us. He always came, every time… Since I was five. Since I can remember. I kept the ten spot, in case… I don’t know. I should have put it in. I hate myself. If I fail, I fail them. The engine stutters. It continues. Dawn, the sun rises… slowly. The kids asleep. Sally watchful over them. Still ever quiet. “good girl” The border is not far. There is a slight wind… “E” Red line for far…very far… too long. “Ma’am, carrying in fruits or vegetables?” He stared in the driver’s window. Where did he come from? His voice strong and sure, but suspicious. “No.” “Okay, welcome to Arizona.” One mile in… Pa found us. The kid’s woke up as he hitched up his truck to mine. Towing us to a better life. Thank you, God.

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Date: 11/19/2019 10:16:00 AM
You did a great job capturing the suspense and urgency of the moment.
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Ann Foster
Date: 11/19/2019 10:18:00 AM
It was very close indeed. Have a day that surprises.... you... Ann
Date: 11/19/2019 9:48:00 AM
I could feel the tenseness and uneasiness as I read this wonderful story and it's happy ending. Nicely done Ann.
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Date: 11/19/2019 10:17:00 AM
Thank you friend. Have the very nicest day. Ann

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