The Tale of Billy Bob Bunny

When Billy Bob Bunny turned one, his mama said, “Listen up, son. I’m sure you could get away from a net, but beware the guy bearing a gun! If a gun-toting farmer you see, you must hip hop away instantly. If he has good aim, you might end up lame or worse yet, rabbit stew you will be. So do please, Billy Bob, take good care that you don’t end up being the hare that loses his life so Farmer Jack’s wife has a soft rabbit stole she can wear!” But it wasn’t Billy Bob’s habit to listen to his Mama Rabbit. Without using good sense, he hopped over the fence, saw a carrot and started to grab it. Farmer Jack spied that rascal. Oh, my! From a gun, bullets started to fly. When a shot nicked his ear, Billy fell down from fear. Then he heard a small sound like a cry. “Please don’t shoot at the bunny again,” cried the farmer’s sweet daughter, and then Billy could feel her stroking his soft fur, and at night he was placed in a pen. Mama came to the pen and she said, “You are trapped. I’m just glad you’re not dead.” Though no freedom he had, Billy Bob was not sad. “I’m a loved pet,” he said, “and well fed!” The moral of this story is: You can tolerate any condition as long as you are loved and well fed!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 11/20/2014 3:16:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea your top of the class placement! Great moral to this piece that I love! It can be applied universally! Pandita
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Date: 11/20/2014 6:52:00 AM
very cleverly done Andrea and your moral is spot on congrats on a very fine win hugs
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Date: 11/19/2014 9:42:00 PM
That should read you should have read or told stories to me.
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Date: 11/19/2014 9:41:00 PM
You should have or told stories to me when we were growing up. This was great I love the clever use of your words.
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Date: 11/19/2014 2:37:00 AM
Hi Andrea. Congratulations once again for your nice piece! ^_^
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Date: 11/18/2014 11:00:00 PM
Wow, great job on this one Andrea! Congratulations on it being Number One!Loved your ending!"he hopped over the fence, saw a carrot and started to grab it." These lines reminded me of your footle poem where you say "grab it Rabbit'. by Pick pocket bunny. I always remember that one.
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Date: 11/18/2014 9:22:00 PM
Wow Andrea what a magnificent write and a moral ! congrats on huge win!
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Date: 11/18/2014 6:57:00 PM
Great moral tale, Andrea. Congratulations
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Date: 11/18/2014 6:35:00 PM
Ha ha, this is great!
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Date: 11/18/2014 4:31:00 PM
A lovely story Andrea...Congrats on the win
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Date: 11/18/2014 3:52:00 PM
Andrea, what an adorable fable! I love it! Congrats on your well-deserved top win. Sandra
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Date: 11/18/2014 3:21:00 PM
Fantastic, Andrea. Congrats! Great Job! xxxRalph
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Date: 11/18/2014 1:51:00 PM
Brilliantly penned set of Limericks Andrea. Congratulations on your top spot win. I'm sure glad no one ate Billy Bob.
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Date: 11/18/2014 11:49:00 AM
many congrats Andrea:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/18/2014 11:34:00 AM
Now see, I did again another great comment below. I'm a big fan of me! Also I predict that Paul will post in between my two posts.
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Date: 11/18/2014 11:34:00 AM
Well done, Andrea...you won in style! A chain of 7 limericks that are so cute and enjoyable to read. I am waiting for my granddaughter Valentina so she can read this one; she'll love it:) // paul
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Date: 11/18/2014 11:31:00 AM
Honestly I believe I should get a first place comment award for the Congratulations I left you below. I wish I could fav my own comment but I will fav this cotton tail.
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Date: 11/18/2014 11:28:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR FIRST PLACE WIN! YOU WON BY A HARE!
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Date: 11/18/2014 11:27:00 AM
Congrats Andrea,I think your lesson here is direct and you have good words to express it ...huggs
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Date: 9/8/2013 3:10:00 PM
Oh, I really like this. I read it to my six yr old grand-daughter. She like that the little girl saved him ;} Glad you liked my Belladonna ;} Also congrats on your win ;}
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Date: 3/21/2012 3:27:00 AM
Not everybody can tell a story in rhyme , let alone in perfect limerick rhyme and with an AAAHHHH !! ending . Had to be a winner and well done . PS, Fathima was a regular here some years back . I wrote for her , in reply to piece she had written about herself , on a windy day . Tks again for stopping by my " rambling page" and for leaving kind words . Sean ..
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Date: 3/11/2012 12:43:00 AM
You must be getting late.But I want to know if you advance the time by 1 hr and 38 min.Then you are just skipping this time.I mean after just midnight it will be 1:38 ? So there will not be any record of this 1hr and 38 min?
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Date: 3/4/2012 9:08:00 AM
Andrea, congrats on your bunny win! Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 3/2/2012 8:21:00 PM
ANDREA... CONGRATULATIONS ..ON YOUR WONDERFUL WIN~ Have yourself a very nice night ;-)*always..pd
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Date: 3/2/2012 3:02:00 PM
Andrea, wonderful story. A wonderful use of the limerick, not an easy task but you nailed it. Well done and congrats on making Carol's winners' list............................S.Ronthorpe
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