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The Tail - (Rhyme) of Us

It's May for Jacaranda trees, We laugh in purple in the breeze... Bulldozers bite. We dare to say "HELLO" to bees and make the toddlers laugh and sneeze... Construction site. Landscaping Nature as you please Requires coldness - Soul's disease. This is my fight! www.scripca.com

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/16/2010 10:33:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Iolanda. Love, Carol

Billy Thekidster

Date: 11/20/2009 2:05:00 PM

As a Nature lover myself, I can appreciate the message of your poetic wealth. I'm in the building trade you see but I only build in major cities. To destroy Nature, I couldn't live with myself. - Great Piece Iolanda. Thanks for your comment on my work. Best Wishes Always, Bill

James Marshall Goff

Date: 4/11/2009 5:13:00 AM

holy cow!!! truly a fun, artistic poem! Iolanda, nice! jmg

John Loving Iii

Date: 4/7/2009 4:46:00 PM

agree somewhat. in civilization i like civilization but i'll leave lots of room for conservation. john h loving iii

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 4/6/2009 9:07:00 AM

Fascinating..go on, more trail-rhyme.

Leon Wilson

Date: 4/6/2009 12:56:00 AM

Hi Iolanda I can relate to this poem. Near where I live they are building a new highway and have uprooted lots of mature trees, It looks like a cemetery as you drive pass, very sad.

Xavier Keough

Date: 4/5/2009 8:32:00 PM

I love how you so seamlessly intertwined the imagery with the message. Well done.