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The Sword of Betrayal

Mightier than the sword Is the icy stare Of a woman scorned Her silence may slay 1000 men As she locks the door to her wounded heart Dragons dare not melt the ice

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Robert Lindley

Date: 5/6/2014 9:29:00 PM

So few words yet so great insight! Took me over twenty years and too many heartbreaks to understand that a woman is a gentle creature until you foolishly cock her hammer and dare her to shoot. Both barrels then blast you to smithereens! I know after being blasted more than once in my long life!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/11/2014 8:45:00 PM

Thank you, your reply was a poem unto itself!! Cheers

Jake Ponce

Date: 5/4/2014 6:54:00 AM

This is very true. How you captured how most gals (even men) react to betrayal is fantastically graphic.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/5/2014 6:20:00 PM

Thanks Jake much appreciated

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/3/2014 11:11:00 PM

I read this earlier, but didn't post a comment at the time! ;) "Hell knoweth not the wrath of a woman scorned." Spectacular write, my dear. Wonderfully worded. You have indeed brought me smiles today. Thank you.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/5/2014 5:45:00 PM

Your works bring smiles to many, always remember that!

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 5/3/2014 7:24:00 PM

WOW! Isn't that the cold truth? I think my heart froze many years ago, but I don't ask for revenge pity, or love. Great poem on the truth.... Lucilla

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/5/2014 6:19:00 PM

Ok you just inspired me to another poem!!!!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/5/2014 5:19:00 PM

Yes is sad how many frozen hearts there are in this world. We need some global warming!

Cherl Dunn

Date: 5/3/2014 6:11:00 PM

Oh so true now and in throughout history a woman can kill a nation the honesty ion with her beauty or stare alone enjoyed it a lot, cheri

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/5/2014 5:18:00 PM

Thanks Cherl , somehow I think you may find a poem out of that!!! :)

Gina Montalbo

Date: 5/3/2014 10:05:00 AM

A scorn women is to fear but time heal all wonds only a pure heart can melt ice... Gina

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/3/2014 10:43:00 AM

Your smile could melt the Antarctica!!!!! Thanks Gina!!

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 5/2/2014 7:03:00 PM

Excellent write on this truthful write. You sir are full of wisdom. Hugs

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/5/2014 5:17:00 PM

Also have a big iceberg in my backyard, I tend to learn my wisdom the hard way! :)

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/2/2014 9:23:00 PM

Thanks for the kind words, I might have you call some of my friends to explain that!!!! :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/2/2014 7:49:00 AM

This one gives me chills, sadly I have seen that stare, burrrrrrrrrrrrrr

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/2/2014 9:22:00 PM

I wrote this one after reading Eileen's poem, and I was sure this one would bring her a wee smile!!

Casarah Nance

Date: 5/2/2014 5:58:00 AM

If I say Wow, I don't think that would be enough. Man, I like a lot!!! *cookies for you* :)

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/2/2014 9:20:00 PM

You are too kind!!!!