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The Swan

The Swan As I mused on this sunshine day, So cold, too cold I hear “The Swan,” And I am taken on a lakeside dream, Of swans dipping, swans wrapping, Swans graceful, music afar. Visions of young love, Our love, your eyes of blue, Of warm, sunny picnics, You’re throwing balls with the boys, And I watch you proudly, With our little girl in hand. As I mused on this sunshine day, So cold, too cold I hear “The Swan.”

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Date: 1/27/2018 7:05:00 PM
Beautiful. I have a thing for swans.
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Date: 1/20/2018 4:38:00 PM
Beautiful, love filled, full of soothing imagery and fond memory..well written SW.
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Date: 1/20/2018 8:15:00 AM
- Oh, this was beautiful Sunlite - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/19/2018 6:41:00 PM
It's really poignant the way you wrapped back around to the other day, also so cold and too cold to hear The Swan. Very clever writing!
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Date: 1/17/2018 11:43:00 PM
Beautifully written. Charming, Sunlite.
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Date: 1/17/2018 3:35:00 PM
Beautiful reverie so lovingly and gracefully expressed Sunlite. Warmest wishes ~Susan
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Date: 1/17/2018 2:39:00 PM
Such a beautiful poem...
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Date: 1/17/2018 1:54:00 PM
A warming pen, love it :) xomo!
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Date: 1/17/2018 12:26:00 PM
Sweet, tender and filled with beauty and adoration. This poem really made me smile.
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Date: 1/17/2018 10:32:00 AM
Very nice Sunlite :)
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