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The Swan

Perched upon the harbour wall on a dusky summer night From the corner of my eye I spied a wonderous sight A graceful pure white swan with four cygnets in a line This image was so wonderful; it was simply divine Young cygnets covered in their fine downy feathers Will follow their mother through all types of weather They glided past so peacefully I sat and stared in awe I could watch these birds for hours and be wanting more They floated up on the water and finally reached the shore I watched them nestle up together then headed for my door Jan Allison 25th June 2014

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Date: 6/27/2014 8:52:00 PM
Oh Jan, yes I also love those beautiful swans, except that we have black ones, in fact when we went to the lake last there were about 4 cygnets in tow, what a beautiful sight, wish I could write about them like you have. Take care my friend..........Vera.............
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Date: 6/28/2014 4:27:00 AM
Thanks for the lovely comment Vera. Hugs as ever to you both. Jan xxx
Date: 6/25/2014 1:12:00 PM
Yes. I love this visual piece. great subject well done.much enjoyed. best wishes. Pete.
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Date: 6/25/2014 3:40:00 PM
Thanks peter for the lovely comment:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 6/25/2014 12:23:00 PM
- Beautiful ..... need no more words,Jan :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/25/2014 3:39:00 PM
Thanks Anne Lise your comment has made my day:-) Hugs jan xxxx
Date: 6/25/2014 10:45:00 AM
What a sight to behold Jan...sounds like you had a perfect day...hugs Tim
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Date: 6/25/2014 11:34:00 AM
Perfect morning nightmare afternoon for family reasons but I'm still smiling through gritted teeth lol. Hugs Jan xxxx
Date: 6/25/2014 8:54:00 AM
I do love swans and nature.Their beauty fills my heart with peace and serenity,,and I'm glad to be reading your wonderful words ,almost like living that enchanting swan moment.
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Date: 6/25/2014 8:57:00 AM
thanks for the lovely comment Charmaine they are such graceful elegant birds I love watching them glide by so gracefully and when they have the cygnets with them its magical. Hugs Jan xx

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