The Swamp

the swamp overgrown wet wild sticky... mosquitoes rule night

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/4/2012 7:19:00 PM

,,Today I'm reading poems from my aunt PD's account, hope you don't mind. Sincerely pd's niece SYLVIA }!{ Hi,Sara;} I just wanna say that even though its so short i still think its great!

Kathryn Collins

Date: 5/29/2012 9:37:00 AM

I'm itchy now.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/28/2012 1:02:00 PM

great last line on those dang mosquitoes, Sara!! Happy Memorial Day to you.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 5/28/2012 9:52:00 AM

you've summed it up perfectly! this poem is a gem!

Jancarl Campi

Date: 5/28/2012 4:39:00 AM

i liked this one. you are so correct! the mosquitoes indeed rule the night in the swamp. Seems like you have been there

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/27/2012 5:24:00 PM

Yes, beware those lanterns at night with all those mosquitoes swarming around! Talk about getting bit...multiple times! I love your glorious poem that you have written here! Great Work!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/27/2012 3:46:00 PM

Hello, Sara..I think you need some Off...lol..to fight off them mosquitos.. I'm very happy you are doing well! Do you live near a swamp?... Here in Texas, all you need is rain...to bring out the nastiness of them blood suckers.. Great image..he he he...even if the image involves, getting bite... Always..pd

David Williams

Date: 5/27/2012 3:13:00 PM

Sara. sounds like my pond..David

Michael Benkhen

Date: 5/27/2012 2:46:00 PM

...Yeah, that's a swamp alright. Beware of leeches.