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The Survivor Tree

As the sun sets on the lone elm tree. Its' silhouette looks upon me. I believe it’s speaking quietly, Whispering with its gentle breeze. Telling me, to approach and see, How my extremities are similar to thee. Caught in amazement, yet stuck in beauty. In the presence of an 80 year old tree. I ask myself, who am I to be, Strong, respected, but most importantly? When actually, who am I not to be? This tree is strong, respected, and important i.e. It gives us these aspects unconsciously. And we too are capable of possessing the- Strong qualities of the Survivor Tree, From its’ symbol of strength in OKC. Surviving the blast of our history. ____________________ The Survivor Tree survived, The blast on April 19, 1995. http://www.oklahomacitynationalmemorial.org

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/11/2009 2:52:00 PM
Wow, what a pleasant tribute. This tree is a strong symbol to survive such a blast. DN
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Date: 2/3/2009 3:00:00 AM
What a thoughtful, touching write. A nice symbol it is. Tyler
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Date: 2/3/2009 2:48:00 AM
Nice muse you chose this day. I love this Tree. A true symbol of survival..........Danielle
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Date: 2/2/2009 5:24:00 PM
The Survivor Tree is a piece of our history. This dedication is...................nice
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Date: 2/1/2009 10:08:00 PM
Your tributic heart keeps tributing, although my words aren't real words but you get what I am saying. The Survivor Tree is a sight to see along with the rest of the memorial. You choose beautiful things to write about. Love Elizabeth
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Date: 2/1/2009 12:25:00 AM
Great poem tributing a true symbol of strength.
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Date: 1/31/2009 8:46:00 PM
This is beautiful, Raul. Like, Sharon, I have nver heard of the tree. I'll have to check out the site. Thank you for sharing this wonderful dedication> Love, Robin
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Date: 1/30/2009 4:40:00 AM
Raul, I never heard about this tree. I still have chills as I am writing this comment. An incredible dedication to a symbol of our strong and unwavering spirit. Awesome write! Love, Shar
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Date: 1/29/2009 4:54:00 PM
I really liked this poem. The centered format gives it a sturdy visual effect which fits with the poem. Nice use of personification. Thank you for sharing your gift of writing with us and for taking time to comment on my poem. Blessings to you. Karen
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Date: 1/29/2009 4:52:00 PM
Great job Raul, I hadnt heard of this tree before. I love the thoughts espressed here. BG
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Date: 1/29/2009 2:44:00 PM
Wonderful piece, Raul! Such a sad day in our history; to be attacked by a terrorist from our own country. But, the tree is a symbol of our indomitable spirit as a nation! Well done! Donna G.
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Date: 1/29/2009 2:17:00 PM
That is where a strong foundation is important, much like our lives, we must stand on firm ground, I love this poem....always, Christy
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Date: 1/29/2009 2:15:00 PM
nice poem 2 thumbs up
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Date: 1/29/2009 2:06:00 PM
A bad day for sure, I'm glad the old tree stood its ground. A great tribute, enjoyed, Ron
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