The Sunset

The Sunset..........
The sun dips into the shore,
as if the earth swallows up the sun,
I am standing on the beach,
thinking of you, seeing you,
wanting you and needing you,
As the waves hit the beach,
and the tide rolls in,
the night becomes cooler,
My skin and body become chilled
and then it comes over me,
the loneliness, the emptiness, the emotions
and I remember all too well the day
you died in my arms and left me.
I feel the tears fall from my eyes,
as the sun disappears into the earth,
realizing you will never feel my love again.
I feel your presence
I feel as if you are behind me
I hear your voice-and i feel your love
My whole body is warm again
I feel your arms engulf my body and soul,
I smile as i see the heavens open up above
glowing with your picture in me.
I hear the waves slapping against the beach
you talking to me and communicating with my soul.
I live day to day knowing that
you are always with me.
When i am cold, you will warm me,
when i feel unloved, you will be there to hold me,
when i feel despair you are like the sun when it rises,
showing to all that hope is alive and
it begins with a new day and a new beginning..........

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 3/18/2022 5:40:00 PM
Hi okiegirlsrock Hudson, truly magnificent poem, all the usual suspects for words to describe your poem, for now, magnificent will have to fit. Sorry for taking so long in finding it.
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Shirley Hudson
Date: 3/19/2022 10:07:00 PM
Oh that is so sweet, thank you so much. This was a tribute to someone who touched my heart beyond words. I found the words and they just seem to flow in one of the best poems I've written. Magnificent no I don't think so but I really appreciate the comment. This is also dedicated to all those people who lost loved ones. Again Thank You.
Date: 3/18/2022 3:35:00 PM
Hello Okiegirlsrock, This is a romantic poem. Filled with love of the person that passed. Hugs.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/19/2022 11:06:00 AM
Hello Okiegirlsrock, it is too bad that you could not save her. This poem Toni is a great poem to remember her by. Yes it would make the hurt less with more comfort No it does not make the person crazy, just human. Hugs.
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Shirley Hudson
Date: 3/18/2022 4:44:00 PM
This is truly one of my favorites. A tribute to the one person I could not save. The poem titled Toni actually explains everything and this is my remembrance of her. I like to think she is always with me. It makes the loss hurt just alittle less with more comfort. Does this make us crazy no just human. Thank you once again.
Date: 6/9/2013 12:17:00 AM
Hi Shirley, Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-) Take care, and enjoy your wonderful days ahead . Always & Forever! **LINDA**
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Date: 5/25/2013 11:19:00 AM
Shirley, your poem is very enjoyable :-) A nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~SKAT~
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