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The Sun's Self Immolation

The pale faced young damsel By evening turned into a blushing bride Her cheeks made red with rouge And her lips glossed in cherry red But the makeup artist, before Seeing the magic of his deft touch By some sudden mental derailment In a bid at self immolation, Set fire to himself Badly burned by the inferno He plunged into the waters below One more attempt at suicide? Or a frantic attempt to save himself, From an act, he impulsively rushed into? Yet another question remains ‘Can flames turn him to ashes?’ Or water, drown his resilience? July. 15.2022 A Brian Strand Premiere Poetry Contest
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Baker Avatar
July 21, 2022 at 2:36 PM
Engaging poetry, Valsa, and great ending questions. Will have to think about the answers. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Foster Avatar
July 21, 2022 at 8:08 AM
Well written. Ann
Callus Avatar
July 16, 2022 at 1:48 PM
To me this as a most striking metaphor, Valsa. I love the ending! ~ Regards // paul
Leffanta Avatar
July 15, 2022 at 6:34 PM
Aye, some artists do take, "Lend me your ear" lliteraetly. Enjoyed, Valsa!
Mcconnell Avatar
July 15, 2022 at 11:36 AM
Lovely penning indeed Valsa, really insight thought. Blessings,Gordon
Poet Avatar
July 15, 2022 at 7:10 AM
Valsa, this is a really fascinating poem that delves deep into several thought-provoking topics and has a philosophical undercurrent. ‘Can flames turn him to ashes?’ Or water, drown his resilience? Best for a win.
Pandit Avatar
July 15, 2022 at 5:54 AM
When the mind goes, anything is possible. Artists are like that I suppose.
Kyser Avatar
July 15, 2022 at 3:24 AM
Very interesting poem, Valsa! Best wishes
Buhagiar Avatar
July 15, 2022 at 1:00 AM
He must have been mad. A person who can be such an artist would never commit suicide, or would he?
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