Chris Green Poet Free verse

The Sunrise Blushes

The sunrise blushes
in sunflower
 chardonnay braids
on soft merlot clouds
as if it has heard
my whispers of love
sent to you upon
cool chrysanthemum 
breezes this perfect 
autumn morning

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Line Gauthier February 4, 2018 at 2:08 PM Beautiful imagery, Chris.

Tim Smith November 4, 2016 at 12:34 PM I think you brought sun out everywhere today. Beautiful Chris Green November 4, 2016 at 1:35 PM Thanks so much my friend, the funny thing is, it is cloudy here today. :)

John Hamilton November 4, 2016 at 11:56 AM Red red wine...chardonnay or merlot? I'll take the merlot clouds please table 1. Lovely imagery! Made my day! Chris Green November 4, 2016 at 12:14 PM Thanks so much John, Table for 1 coming right up. :)

Maurice Yvonne November 4, 2016 at 9:21 AM WOW!!!! A Fav. Chris Green November 4, 2016 at 9:54 AM Thanks so very much Maurice. I appreciate your WOW this morning. :) That adds much more sunshine to the day.

Heidi Sands November 4, 2016 at 8:20 AM What a beautiful morning written about in this poem! :)....Yes, just perfect. :) Chris Green November 4, 2016 at 8:57 AM Good morning Heidi. :) Thanks so much my friend, I am happy you enjoyed this one. I hope it made you smile.

Phil Capitano November 4, 2016 at 7:45 AM Simple and elegant images ~ merlot clouds ~ priceless. Chris Green November 4, 2016 at 8:57 AM Thanks so much Phil, I am happy you enjoyed this one.

Jan Allison November 4, 2016 at 7:35 AM such fabulous imagery Chris it really is a perfect morning - oh I fancy seeing some of those soft merlot clouds rather than the grey rain ones we have today:-( hugs Jan xx7 Chris Green November 4, 2016 at 8:56 AM I know what you mean Jan, they are a beautiful sight to behold and far nicer than a grey and gloomy day. Thank you so much for your nice comment

Charmaine Chircop November 4, 2016 at 6:32 AM It is indeed a sunny and beautiful morning here on my isle...And it seems on your mind too..Such a beautiful poem which uplifts our spirits... Chris Green November 4, 2016 at 8:55 AM Thanks you Charmaine, so very much. Your kindness is always a sunny day to me.

Susan Baquie November 4, 2016 at 6:17 AM I enjoyed your poem - quite lovely Chris Green November 4, 2016 at 8:55 AM Thank you so very much Susan. That is such a nice thing to say.

Paloma P November 4, 2016 at 6:13 AM Wow, what an effect in so few lovely words. Good morning, no doubt! Chris Green November 4, 2016 at 8:54 AM Good morning Paloma and thank you for your wonderful comment on my little poem.

White Wolf November 4, 2016 at 6:12 AM Good morning great poet, I'm just about to hit the fart sack over the seas and far away! Ha, Lovely morning poem Chris. Good night my friend Chris Green November 4, 2016 at 8:54 AM Well, keep those covers pulled up tight around you, real tight. :) Thanks my friend.