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The Sunrise Blushes

The sunrise blushes
in sunflower
 chardonnay braids
on soft merlot clouds
as if it has heard
my whispers of love
sent to you upon
cool chrysanthemum 
breezes this perfect 
autumn morning

Copyright © Chris Green | Year Posted 2016

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Line Gauthier Date: 2/4/2018 2:08:00 PM Beautiful imagery, Chris. Login to Reply

Tim Smith Date: 11/4/2016 12:34:00 PM I think you brought sun out everywhere today. Beautiful Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 11/4/2016 1:35:00 PM Thanks so much my friend, the funny thing is, it is cloudy here today. :)

John Hamilton Date: 11/4/2016 11:56:00 AM Red red wine...chardonnay or merlot? I'll take the merlot clouds please table 1. Lovely imagery! Made my day! Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 11/4/2016 12:14:00 PM Thanks so much John, Table for 1 coming right up. :)

Maurice Yvonne Date: 11/4/2016 9:21:00 AM WOW!!!! A Fav. Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 11/4/2016 9:54:00 AM Thanks so very much Maurice. I appreciate your WOW this morning. :) That adds much more sunshine to the day.

Heidi Sands Date: 11/4/2016 8:20:00 AM What a beautiful morning written about in this poem! :)....Yes, just perfect. :) Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 11/4/2016 8:57:00 AM Good morning Heidi. :) Thanks so much my friend, I am happy you enjoyed this one. I hope it made you smile.

Phil Capitano Date: 11/4/2016 7:45:00 AM Simple and elegant images ~ merlot clouds ~ priceless. Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 11/4/2016 8:57:00 AM Thanks so much Phil, I am happy you enjoyed this one.

Jan Allison Date: 11/4/2016 7:35:00 AM such fabulous imagery Chris it really is a perfect morning - oh I fancy seeing some of those soft merlot clouds rather than the grey rain ones we have today:-( hugs Jan xx7 Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 11/4/2016 8:56:00 AM I know what you mean Jan, they are a beautiful sight to behold and far nicer than a grey and gloomy day. Thank you so much for your nice comment

Charmaine Chircop Date: 11/4/2016 6:32:00 AM It is indeed a sunny and beautiful morning here on my isle...And it seems on your mind too..Such a beautiful poem which uplifts our spirits... Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 11/4/2016 8:55:00 AM Thanks you Charmaine, so very much. Your kindness is always a sunny day to me.

Susan Baquie Date: 11/4/2016 6:17:00 AM I enjoyed your poem - quite lovely Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 11/4/2016 8:55:00 AM Thank you so very much Susan. That is such a nice thing to say.

Paloma P Date: 11/4/2016 6:13:00 AM Wow, what an effect in so few lovely words. Good morning, no doubt! Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 11/4/2016 8:54:00 AM Good morning Paloma and thank you for your wonderful comment on my little poem.

White Wolf Date: 11/4/2016 6:12:00 AM Good morning great poet, I'm just about to hit the fart sack over the seas and far away! Ha, Lovely morning poem Chris. Good night my friend Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 11/4/2016 8:54:00 AM Well, keep those covers pulled up tight around you, real tight. :) Thanks my friend.