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The Sunrise Blushes

The sunrise blushes in sunflower chardonnay braids on soft merlot clouds as if it has heard my whispers of love sent to you upon cool chrysanthemum breezes this perfect autumn morning

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Line Gauthier

Date: 2/4/2018 2:08:00 PM

Beautiful imagery, Chris.

Tim Smith

Date: 11/4/2016 12:34:00 PM

I think you brought sun out everywhere today. Beautiful

Chris Green
Date: 11/4/2016 1:35:00 PM

Thanks so much my friend, the funny thing is, it is cloudy here today. :)

John Hamilton

Date: 11/4/2016 11:56:00 AM

Red red wine...chardonnay or merlot? I'll take the merlot clouds please table 1. Lovely imagery! Made my day!

Chris Green
Date: 11/4/2016 12:14:00 PM

Thanks so much John, Table for 1 coming right up. :)

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/4/2016 9:21:00 AM

WOW!!!! A Fav.

Chris Green
Date: 11/4/2016 9:54:00 AM

Thanks so very much Maurice. I appreciate your WOW this morning. :) That adds much more sunshine to the day.

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/4/2016 8:20:00 AM

What a beautiful morning written about in this poem! :)....Yes, just perfect. :)

Chris Green
Date: 11/4/2016 8:57:00 AM

Good morning Heidi. :) Thanks so much my friend, I am happy you enjoyed this one. I hope it made you smile.

Phil Capitano

Date: 11/4/2016 7:45:00 AM

Simple and elegant images ~ merlot clouds ~ priceless.

Chris Green
Date: 11/4/2016 8:57:00 AM

Thanks so much Phil, I am happy you enjoyed this one.

Jan Allison

Date: 11/4/2016 7:35:00 AM

such fabulous imagery Chris it really is a perfect morning - oh I fancy seeing some of those soft merlot clouds rather than the grey rain ones we have today:-( hugs Jan xx7

Chris Green
Date: 11/4/2016 8:56:00 AM

I know what you mean Jan, they are a beautiful sight to behold and far nicer than a grey and gloomy day. Thank you so much for your nice comment

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/4/2016 6:32:00 AM

It is indeed a sunny and beautiful morning here on my isle...And it seems on your mind too..Such a beautiful poem which uplifts our spirits...

Chris Green
Date: 11/4/2016 8:55:00 AM

Thanks you Charmaine, so very much. Your kindness is always a sunny day to me.

Susan Baquie

Date: 11/4/2016 6:17:00 AM

I enjoyed your poem - quite lovely

Chris Green
Date: 11/4/2016 8:55:00 AM

Thank you so very much Susan. That is such a nice thing to say.

Paloma P

Date: 11/4/2016 6:13:00 AM

Wow, what an effect in so few lovely words. Good morning, no doubt!

Chris Green
Date: 11/4/2016 8:54:00 AM

Good morning Paloma and thank you for your wonderful comment on my little poem.

White Wolf

Date: 11/4/2016 6:12:00 AM

Good morning great poet, I'm just about to hit the fart sack over the seas and far away! Ha, Lovely morning poem Chris. Good night my friend

Chris Green
Date: 11/4/2016 8:54:00 AM

Well, keep those covers pulled up tight around you, real tight. :) Thanks my friend.