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The Sun Smiles On Us

When the heart is pure and lures the ones who understand. Then we find the stones at rest. No longer the shields are needed. Our job is done. Lets go foward, and grow with the sun. 05/13/14 written by, Larry Berdoo ~WRITE ON!~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/28/2016 7:34:00 PM
Larry, you've expressed yourself well, I like the last line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry when you have time. Love ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/12/2015 11:00:00 PM
Beautiful. :)
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Date: 8/10/2015 10:47:00 PM
Larry, a wonderful read.... LOVE *SKAT*
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Date: 9/2/2014 12:27:00 AM
Outstanding
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Date: 8/21/2014 10:04:00 PM
VERY PEACEFUL,POSITIVE AND ON POINT. NICE
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Date: 8/14/2014 7:54:00 AM
A short n sweet love undrstandin poem, writen in an appealing style. Soo nice to read u again larry.
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Larry Berdoo
Date: 8/15/2014 11:57:00 AM
Stay well, and thank you for your comments, S.zaynub.
Date: 6/10/2014 10:52:00 AM
amazing poetry, truly heart felt
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Larry Berdoo
Date: 8/15/2014 11:54:00 AM
I'm glad you like it, Harry. Thanks for stopping by.
Date: 5/19/2014 7:55:00 AM
Hello Larry! Well done, your poem is a pure marvel, for me. Thnk for being the great poetic writer you are, keep making us dreaming!!! Rita Solis R.
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Larry Berdoo
Date: 5/20/2014 10:16:00 AM
Rita, Thank you.
Date: 5/15/2014 7:26:00 PM
Hello, Larry! It's been a while since I last read your poems. You're excellent as ever and this new piece is gorgeous in every sense.
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Larry Berdoo
Date: 5/16/2014 3:31:00 PM
Thanks Jake. This poem is special.