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The Sun Smiles On Us

When the heart is pure and lures the ones who understand. Then we find the stones at rest. No longer the shields are needed. Our job is done. Lets go foward, and grow with the sun. 05/13/14 written by, Larry Berdoo ~WRITE ON!~

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/28/2016 7:34:00 PM

Larry, you've expressed yourself well, I like the last line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry when you have time. Love ~LINDA~

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 12/12/2015 11:00:00 PM

Beautiful. :)

Skat A

Date: 8/10/2015 10:47:00 PM

Larry, a wonderful read.... LOVE *SKAT*

Keith Baucum

Date: 9/2/2014 12:27:00 AM

Outstanding

Sharita Crawford

Date: 8/21/2014 10:04:00 PM

VERY PEACEFUL,POSITIVE AND ON POINT. NICE

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 8/14/2014 7:54:00 AM

A short n sweet love undrstandin poem, writen in an appealing style. Soo nice to read u again larry.

Larry Berdoo
Date: 8/15/2014 11:57:00 AM

Stay well, and thank you for your comments, S.zaynub.

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/10/2014 10:52:00 AM

amazing poetry, truly heart felt

Larry Berdoo
Date: 8/15/2014 11:54:00 AM

I'm glad you like it, Harry. Thanks for stopping by.

Rita Solis Radius

Date: 5/19/2014 7:55:00 AM

Hello Larry! Well done, your poem is a pure marvel, for me. Thnk for being the great poetic writer you are, keep making us dreaming!!! Rita Solis R.

Larry Berdoo
Date: 5/20/2014 10:16:00 AM

Rita, Thank you.

Jake Ponce

Date: 5/15/2014 7:26:00 PM

Hello, Larry! It's been a while since I last read your poems. You're excellent as ever and this new piece is gorgeous in every sense.

Larry Berdoo
Date: 5/16/2014 3:31:00 PM

Thanks Jake. This poem is special.