The Sun Pouts

I wish I could fly
On the wings of an angel
Cross the vast ocean and sky
To where you're stationed.

Your work must be done
We know this without a doubt
The public good be done, but
The sun seems to pout.
Puffs of cutting clouds
Have dampened its smile so bright
For it's been separated
From the world it loves.
Even with its ache
Continues to emanate
All the light and warmth it has
True love never fades.

I wish I could fly
On the wings of an angel
Cross the vast ocean and sky
To where you're stationed.

By CarolineCécile
March 4, 2011.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 3/12/2011 6:01:00 AM
Désolé pour ne pas écrire de nombreux commentaires ou pour ne pas écrire du tout, mais j'ai encore des problèmes avec mon bras et la main. Sometimes I dreamt that I could fly, would be really great if we could!!! Lovely poem! Alles Gute and have a great weekend!...Gert:)
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Date: 3/6/2011 8:52:00 AM
Caroline, I'm so glad you are posting again and sharing your talent with us. I'm sure there are many people wishing they could spread wings and fly to see their loved ones overseas. When you're forced to wait behind, it can be very lonely. I hope your new beau is not stationed overseas. Another beautiful poem from you! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/4/2011 12:54:00 PM
The weekend is here and I am trying to get some poetry read. I am glad you had something new here for me to enjoy today Caroline. I wish you a wonderful weekend filled with new found inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/4/2011 10:25:00 AM
Very philosophial expressions on The sun pouts, Caroline
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