The Sun Is Bright

they said the flower was as golden as a flame
you believed it was tar, color of shame;
for beyond the sun and the skies lived a name
whose great eye flickered eternal fire 
that can make one slouch dead on the bier;

for into the dark night shone a solitary star
as that was your accepted belief as dear
of a disintegrated, moldy hope;
that they averred should lob a long rope
and truss them together in stillness
for thus lies huge human bliss,

as the soul turns bright when there is light
from the sun and the stars and the grand eye
and beings go cheery even though at night
for if you are not so surely soon you will die
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Riabi Dziri Avatar
March 17, 2020 at 10:37 AM
There's a unique flair into your poetry, HONESTY! Depth and Beauty in what you see with your heart and mind! A delight to read what you wonderfully write! Best regards and blessings.
Kendrick Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 8:35 AM
Enjoyed reading your work. I believe it is deeper than surface level. Sara
Kendrick Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 8:34 AM
Enjoyed reading your work. I believe it is deeper than surface level. Sara
Kendrick Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 8:34 AM
Enjoyed reading your work. I believe it is deeper than surface level. Sara
Dietrich Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 6:02 PM
wow, last time I saw this poem was two years ago!! And its post was in 2012. Where have you been, Honesty?? Will you return and write some new poems for us?
Fields Avatar
May 19, 2017 at 12:56 PM
made me think of a soul flowing out into space - cold and wondering - not saying that's what the poems about
Dietrich Avatar
December 14, 2016 at 3:54 PM
I enjoyed the contrasts in here and the luscious imagery, Honesty. Very nice.
A  Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 12:16 AM
HONESTY, enjoyed reading your poem. Hugs **SKAT**
Dietrich Avatar
August 6, 2013 at 4:21 PM
this is so full of deep meaning. Haven't seen you in a while, Honesty, but it was nice to stumble upon this one.
Guzzi Avatar
April 16, 2013 at 3:33 PM
You need to go on, it seems unfinished unless it is your intent that we all know death will come unannounced? Light & Love
A   Avatar
March 5, 2013 at 8:41 PM
Honesty, ooo.... the color of shame. a soul turning bright... i think i will stick to believing... enjoyed,, ~LINDA
Guzzi Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 2:10 PM
I enjoyed your rhyming verse this afternoon. Thanks so much for stopping by my poem. Light & Love
Guzzi Avatar
February 26, 2013 at 8:38 AM
So nice to read your work today. Light & Love
Palli Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 12:32 AM
i enjoyed that thanks
Andresen Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 12:14 AM
Honesty, this is good - very well written. - oxox Anne-Lise
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