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The Sun Beats Down

The sun beats down on my garden's back -- Looking up, I squeeze my eyes tightly Seeking a cloud that will let down Her skirts... I mumble a prayer for moisture As once-staunch squirrels slump Their faces drawn, like withered leaves

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 8/9/2019 3:40:00 PM
Are you having a draught out there across the pond, or just a dry patch - either way Gershon my friend my prayers are with you for rain, please God. Hugs, Jenny.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/9/2019 4:12:00 PM
Not a drought exactly, but we sure could use more rain! Thanks for your prayers! :) gw
Date: 8/9/2019 8:25:00 AM
Nicely penned, Gershon, sounds like Texas in August. All the best my friend. John
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/9/2019 12:10:00 PM
I was calling on my years in Chicago, but Houston will certainly do. Thanks for the support, John. Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 8/9/2019 6:20:00 AM
What an interesting way...a poetic and sensuous way to express your desire...for rain! Nice
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/9/2019 12:09:00 PM
There you go: Rain can sometimes be vastly underrated! :) gw

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