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Winter has begun and now I miss the sun


 

I thought I knew the sun. I thought I had it tamed. When it looked dim and weak, I’d just blow on the flames. But now my faith is shaken - perhaps I was mistaken. It seems the sun has ghosted me. I miss those rays that roasted me.

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Date: 12/24/2020 1:09:00 PM
The way you combine your tone, wit and humor in your poetry is uncanny. Very enjoyable poem.
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Anais Vionet
Date: 12/25/2020 11:53:00 AM
Awww, Thank you So much =]
Date: 12/24/2020 10:25:00 AM
I miss the freedom to go out and bask under the sun! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 12/24/2020 12:15:00 PM
Me too - there’s something relaxing about doing homework outside in the shade.
Date: 12/24/2020 9:27:00 AM
Enjoyed this! Spring’ll be here before we know it (Spring being the only thing I like about Winter) Merry Christmas and Happy Solstice Anais, xomo!
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Date: 12/24/2020 10:25:00 AM
Yet you live in Canada????? Aloha! Rico
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Anais Vionet
Date: 12/24/2020 9:34:00 AM
Thank you and Merry Christmas!
Date: 12/24/2020 7:13:00 AM
Me too...I miss those rays! Winter is my least favorite season, I am a Texas boy and I love the sun and the heat.
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Date: 12/24/2020 9:32:00 AM
I like winter - when it’s cold AND sunny - but that’s the exception I think. Merry Christmas John!

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