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The Summer's Gone


The summer's gone, and here we are
into the fall of this old year.
It seemed the end was very far
as New Year's day brought us new cheer.

Into the fall of this old year
we shift our thoughts and give a sigh.
As New Year's day brought us new cheer...
surprised how fast this year would fly.

We shift our thoughts and give a sigh; 
our summertime turned into fall.
Surprised how fast this year would fly;
exchanged her greens for a gold shawl.

Our summertime turned into fall
from summer sun to cool crisp days:
exchanged her greens for a gold shawl;
from pastel blooms to autumn-blaze.

From summer sun to cool crisp days,
it seemed the end was very far
from pastel blooms to autumn-blaze.
The summer's gone, and here we are.


Sandra M. Haight

~4th Place~
Contest: Best Rhyming poem September-October 2017
Sponsor: John Hamilton
Judged: 11/06/2017

~3rd Place~
The Summers Gone
Contest: Write Me A Pantoum
Sponsor: Kim Rodrigues
Judged: 10/18/2017
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Barden Avatar
November 7, 2017 at 6:00 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win, Sandra - nicely done, my friend! :-)
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November 6, 2017 at 11:52 PM
Congratulations, Sandra on your win.
Ashley Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 9:20 PM
Returning to congratulate you again Sandra for your fine win with your excellent poem!
Roper Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 7:56 PM
Sandra, back again to congratulate you on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*
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October 19, 2017 at 8:10 PM
I really like this poem, Sandra! Congrats on your win. Janice
Haight Avatar
October 20, 2017 at 7:48 AM
Thank you very much, Janice, for your nice comments and congrats. Hugs, Sandra
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October 19, 2017 at 2:47 PM
Hi Mrs. Sandra, I really enjoy reading your poetry. You are such a gifted and accomplished writer. We are lucky to have a writer of your caliber on the soup. Your wisdom and talent shines in this "seasonal " pantoum. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
Haight Avatar
October 20, 2017 at 7:50 AM
Dear Alexis, I am humbled and honored by your very complimentary and positive comments. Thank you so very much for your outstanding support. I appreciate it so much. Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
October 19, 2017 at 12:34 PM
Such a beautiful seasonal poem Sandra, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Roper Avatar
October 19, 2017 at 11:25 AM
Sandra, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*
Haight Avatar
October 20, 2017 at 7:50 AM
Thank you, Eve! Hugs, Sandra
Pett Avatar
October 19, 2017 at 5:08 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Sandra, I really enjoyed reading this well written poem. :))
Ashley Avatar
October 18, 2017 at 9:26 PM
Congratulations Sandra on your fine win with your lovely poem.
Haight Avatar
October 20, 2017 at 7:51 AM
Thank you so very much, Susan. Sandra
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October 18, 2017 at 9:00 PM
Congrats on your 3rd place win, Sandra!
Haight Avatar
October 20, 2017 at 7:51 AM
Thank you, Kim. I enjoyed writing this poem for your inspiring contest. Hugs, Sandra
Pandit Avatar
October 6, 2017 at 5:54 AM
A beautiful flow and rhythm-- this is a well written Pantoum--lines wrap around smoothly--skillful poetry! Best for a win, Sandra!
Gupta Avatar
October 3, 2017 at 6:22 AM
Lovely Pantoum, Sandra ... Enjoyed the images ... Best wishes for nice success ...
Haight Avatar
October 20, 2017 at 7:53 AM
Thank you, Probir. I appreciate your visit and lovely comments. Sandra
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