The Summer Play

. Purple Phlox dances Wind plays summer tune in trees Shadow closes act

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Doris Culverhouse

Date: 7/30/2010 11:12:00 AM

enjoyed reading very beautiful write!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/29/2010 8:53:00 PM

wow, you did an awesome job with this one, Sara!!!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/29/2010 5:29:00 PM

A nice pen picture of the summer play

John Loving Iii

Date: 7/29/2010 4:05:00 PM

i guess the other flocks i s just plain off white

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/29/2010 3:00:00 PM

Rain and storms closing our act today Sara but this lovely piece is very vibrant ..full of color and splendor... luv your last line.. with luv..

John Loving Iii

Date: 7/29/2010 2:37:00 PM

are you against me too?

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 7/29/2010 2:37:00 PM

Hi Sarah I wish hand is about a topic I am as yet to understand just a dream I am running out of time to experience and I hope others would feel the same about. Cheers

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/29/2010 2:33:00 PM

Enjoyed the close act summer has for us Sara, have a nice one,..p.d.

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 7/29/2010 2:23:00 PM

Hi Sarah Purple phlox sounds like me when things are not going according to my grand master plan , please will your hand i hope you understand. Cheers