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The Summer Fling

A delight for female eyes was his gorgeous face and strong physique; His dark eyes lured them in, but his kisses left them spellbound. The beauty of his skin could but briefly hide his fickle heart. One summer he met at last the woman who could claim his heart - A lovely Aphrodite to match this young Adonis. With her wiles, she beguiled him, and his flighty heart then grew devout. From June to July, boundless seemed their rapture; how they loved . . . in brilliant fields of daffodils; on amber sand beneath the moon! By August, he was on one knee with a diamond ring in hand. Red anemones bloom in the garden where he saw her last. The Aphrodite he hoped to wed was someone else instead - Brawn and beauty are not all; a wise Athena finished their fling. For Deb's Sijo Strings Contest

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Date: 1/29/2015 3:38:00 PM
Andrea, love the imagery on this write, a 7. Blessings dear friend Eve
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Date: 10/21/2014 8:24:00 PM
This is excellent, Andrea. Each sijo true to the form.
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Date: 9/10/2014 9:22:00 PM
Summer romance that blooms and then falls apart in this poem. Nice one. love phyl
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Date: 7/4/2014 6:50:00 AM
Andrea, This is a sensational story told in sijo form with a wise life lesson conveyed. Top notch in my book. bfn Lainie
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Date: 7/3/2014 11:28:00 AM
Thanks for the soup mail... No worries.... Awesome win... Linda
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Date: 7/3/2014 6:07:00 AM
A gripping romantic tale of the summer love, Andrea, congrats
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Date: 7/3/2014 2:04:00 AM
Very romantic summer fling sijo strings, Andrea. Congrats on the win. Mohan
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Date: 7/2/2014 7:18:00 PM
Lovely write Andrea ...congrats on your win
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Date: 7/2/2014 6:26:00 PM
your fourth sijo so great.. :D! COngratulations Anrea.. :D
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Date: 7/2/2014 6:26:00 PM
Spectacular! much different from the others on the list, this is definatly worthy of a winner, you are a goddess with a poetic paintbrush :)
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Date: 7/2/2014 5:34:00 PM
Hi Andrea, Congrats. Enjoyable imagery and expertly handled sijo. All the best Theresa xx
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Date: 7/2/2014 3:53:00 PM
Hi Andrea, congratulations on a well-deserved great win! The imagery is magnificent! Beautiful write! Kindest regards.
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Date: 7/2/2014 2:52:00 PM
Another summer break-up poem. But as such captures the thrill of summer love in ancient Greece. Well done you tied the summer strings together nicely.
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Date: 7/2/2014 1:58:00 PM
Love it Andrea! The sting of summer love! Congrats on a great win. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 7/2/2014 1:47:00 PM
Awesome Andrea ! Every string is so beautiful n complementing ,, beauty comes alive ,, congrats on win !
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Date: 7/2/2014 1:41:00 PM
Very creative write Andrea. Brawn vis brains. Lovely imagery, especially in 3rd sijo. Congrats on a fine win. // paul
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Date: 6/18/2014 8:45:00 PM
I love this Andrea, his fickle heart had a well needed lesson. Terrific write!
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Date: 6/18/2014 3:02:00 PM
Your poem mesmerizes with brilliant imagery "in brilliant fields of daffodils; on amber sand beneath the moon!" and then ends with the reward a fickle heart deserves. Brilliant Sijo Andrea!
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Date: 6/15/2014 7:31:00 AM
LOL, witty write indeed
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Date: 6/14/2014 10:46:00 PM
Andrea, this is some sweet, heavy artillery summer fling. I can't imagine anyone saying NO, to that diamond ring. Excellent imagery. XOX...Linda
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Date: 6/13/2014 2:49:00 PM
you stepped right up the ladder with this mythical wonder, andie... haven't done one yet... so busy with house renovation.. will soupy you soon!.. lovely sijo!.. huggs and congrats on your win in my contest... will send my cheers to all when time allows..
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Date: 6/13/2014 12:23:00 PM
This poem has such an awesome ancient tone and lesson to it Andrea. Makes me grateful that I have wisdom to match my braun, realizing the difference between a Goddess and a Harpy. I wonder who gained most, the one who experienced true love, or the one who stepped with lies.Funny how predators often overestimate their strengths and underestimate the intuition of their prospective prey. This is a bona fide masterpiece Andrea, a FAV!
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Date: 6/13/2014 9:31:00 AM
Good for Athena! ~ This reminds me of one I read by you a long time ago~! BTW....I'm BaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaCK!~ locked and loaded with 10,000 or so new poems. glad to see you are still at it!
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Date: 6/13/2014 12:51:00 AM
Hi Andrea! Just stopped by to say hello, and to catch up on your writes. This one is great. Of course, after reading the first few lines I assumed it was about me lol Smiles and hugs, my friend...Mel
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Date: 6/13/2014 12:31:00 AM
This is an example of extraordinary writing skill. Mesmerizing! The world would have to wait a long time for me or most other mortals to attempt such.
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