The Strong Tree

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The Strong Tree

What is a tree without its roots?
It is tall and bold
But broken to touch
It lives with such pride
As it touches the sky
But is shattered 
Snow runs down a mountain side
Showing how it cries for the tree
The tree is doomed to die
But, the tree is untroubled
And cheerful in the mind
Looking out at the world
On the winter days that come to him
It will be Spring soon, he says
And life will be born
The tree has strong hope 
That it will become free and strong

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 9/5/2015 1:00:00 PM
Aidan Gilbert , Congratulations :) On your wonderful Honorable Mention. ~SKAT~
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Date: 9/4/2015 3:51:00 AM
Wonderful write n a great take on the theme Aidan! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 7/16/2015 3:45:00 PM
This poem is like a Simile to me. We should "copy" from the strength shown by the tree in our lives too. The "Strong Tree" is confident that it will receive "new Life" again in spring. This is how one needs to feel when undergoing any challenge we encounter.
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Aidan Gilbert
Date: 9/1/2015 10:42:00 PM
thank you for those words. I believe that too
Date: 6/26/2015 10:18:00 AM
Good write
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Aidan Gilbert
Date: 7/6/2015 11:38:00 PM
thanks
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