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The Striper's Soul

On that cold, damp beach, I came to claim my fame A hero of the inlet, A master of the game. It was late November, The moon was shining full. My hook was fresh with clam, Set to bring my jewel. So with a lofty cast, I watched my bait take air. Then down into the water, It fell into his lair. Patiently, I did wait, With my finger on the line. Waiting for the stripers touch, Hoping he would dine. The night was very peaceful A couple shooting stars. I closed my eyes and wondered, Were stripers near or far. And then there was a tug, And then silence on my line. I knew that he'd be back, I knew that he'd be mine. I took a quiet moment, To think about his soul. Are stripers much like us? This I feel I know. My rod just bent in half! My heart is pounding fast! My line is spooling out, What a sudden blast! He's on, I set my hook! And then I set again! I give him time to run, My rod just bends and bends! A light rain starts to form, And sweat roles off my face. There's no place I'd rather be, Than in this misty place. I feel that I just hooked him, Yet time has spilled away. I've been battling this nice fish, For hours of the day. I spin the reel a few more times, And now can see his tail. He hurls out of the water, Within the northeast gale. I bring him into shore, And land him on the beach. There's nothing more to question, This fish is five long feet. Between fisherman and fish, The two of us did play. I'll send him back to sea, Until another day. These stripers have a gaming blood, It's nice to understand, That they enjoy the fight so much, They'll do it all again. 2010

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Date: 11/19/2021 2:17:00 AM
I am a total vegetarian and would hate to kill any creature! Because I see the soul of other creatures as our own! Glad the fish went back!! A very well written poem! Love the theme, the rhyme and the flow!
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Date: 11/18/2021 8:14:00 PM
I love the journey of the verse, Robert, I am not a person that fish, but my husband and boys did. They love the peace it gave them.
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Date: 9/14/2021 7:47:00 AM
Great poem, I have done a little bit of fishing down through the years, thank you for your poetry.
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Robert James Liguori
Date: 10/7/2021 3:08:00 PM
Thanks for the comment! Fishing is fun and fish are beautiful!
Date: 9/1/2021 7:05:00 PM
Welcome to poetry soup. A poem filled with action and suspense :)
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Robert James Liguori
Date: 10/7/2021 3:09:00 PM
Thanks. I've been busy with my poems since this first post!

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