The Strength of a Man ? ( Or You 2 )

The Strength of a Man ?  ( or  You  2 )

Where does it lay

Not arms of muscle brawn
Or in clay sinew to withstand

Nor in adept ability not to be shaken
By the tears of emotion

No it does not begin with this position
Of providing house and home
Bills paid

Or in blood flow defense of a nation

It does not lay in his resolution of promises
So easily broken

Not in the prowess of possession
Or sexual accomplishment

Where does the strength of a man lay

As a man; I will tell you

It lays in his weakness

In the last and final wall broken
It lays in his trembling hands
When he holds his love

All the power of surety’s confidence
By all those things of sinew and blood
Dismantled by love

Where does his strength lay

It lays in the heart of his love
Naked undefended
Capitulation of all his resolve to be a man

It lays in the arms
And crying like a baby
To the breast of his beloved 
Woman

It lives and breathes for her protection
And wounded so, he can see himself
And lay himself out for the breaking

The strength of a man
Lays in his undisguised adoration
In the most pathetic of need
The strength of a man lays stripped and open
And confesses life without her love
Would scour his life to nothing

 You have said I am strong, you said in awe 
“You have so much strength”
But I, my love, am utterly worthless
Just a chrome plated hunk of timbre
A life’s orchestrated flat-line to remember
Of appearance
And semblance
Of a man

Nothing in all my strength

Without you

So just give me
Make me see
My weakness
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 5/26/2009 1:48:00 PM
I see a Samson come for atonement ... no truth will be sacrificed here ... this is good writing. This genius exuding ...
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Date: 5/24/2009 11:51:00 AM
Wonderful piece of love writing.
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Date: 5/24/2009 7:25:00 AM
AMAZING writing my friend... It lays in the arms And crying like a baby To the breast of his beloved Woman.......... your lines are powerful and show all the man you are inside. Great job!
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Date: 5/24/2009 7:20:00 AM
WOW brother man that was very powerful and moving they say behind every man is a strong woman we are one with eachother you prooved that coming from a man its REAL you amaze me more and more with your work you are full of surprises
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