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The Stranger

Something in the way you looked at me. Something perhaps I could see. Your eyes lower, you flash a smile my way. You make my chest tight, but I want you to stay. So many words I hear you say. But not once did your lips stray. Turn your head, let me see. What is it, your shy to talk to me. Still I feel you longing, wanting to know. But when I look up, you just get up and quietly go. Written 2003

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Date: 11/11/2021 6:48:00 AM
Nice work, tight and controlled. A snapshot of those chance encounters that fail due to our inability to communicate ie being shy.
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Stephen Mayne
Date: 11/13/2021 1:50:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 3/6/2020 10:52:00 AM
enjoyed reading your poem.have a great day:)
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Stephen Mayne
Date: 3/6/2020 11:46:00 AM
Thank you, have a lovely day too!

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