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The Story of a Hat

I once owned a pretty hat Flowers and buds formed a garland around People said it looked like a mat I locked it in so it couldn’t be found Then after a year I tried to match it on a gown When located it was damp and musty Smelled like stale bread a month old The flowers looked limp and dusty I tried to straighten it and open its fold Alas inside lived a colony of termites, behold

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/13/2011 9:24:00 AM
well deseved cuddos
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Date: 4/9/2011 10:31:00 PM
happy to see you at the top, tahera.. APLAUSE with love and huggs! :) nette
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Date: 4/9/2011 6:04:00 PM
So cool to see you in that top notch spot Tahera. Great day in the neighborhood friend. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honered Placment! Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/9/2011 10:23:00 AM
Congrats Tahera on your big win!Nice story of a hat you have penned --kashinath
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Date: 4/8/2011 11:36:00 PM
Poor pretty hat. Conratulations on your big win Tahera. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/8/2011 10:57:00 PM
Congratulations tahera on your 1st place win with this exceptionally creative poetry on a hat .Enjoyed it...Love, Gautami
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Date: 4/8/2011 3:55:00 PM
This is so cute, Tahera!! Congratulations ....I hope you were able to buy a new hat!! LOL !
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Date: 4/8/2011 3:43:00 PM
Super congrats Tahera my friend on your first place win in the bonnet contest ... an amazing entry full of fun and imagery luv.. enjoy your top spot where the air is as rare as your beautiful words...
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Date: 4/8/2011 2:50:00 PM
Congratulations on the first place win in the contest, Tahera
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Date: 4/8/2011 2:25:00 PM
Congrats on your win!!! Ellen
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Date: 4/8/2011 2:13:00 PM
goodness! this has to be real! LOL congrad's on your BIG win. Light & Love
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Date: 4/8/2011 2:00:00 PM
Sensational story, dear Tahera. Many congrats on your FIRST PLACE WIN. Lainie
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Date: 4/8/2011 1:46:00 PM
Big congrats on taking the top spot in Carol's contest! I'm not surprised as I loved this poem the first time I read it, Tahera. Awesome! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/8/2011 1:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest Tahera. The poems were all so good was hard to judge. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/14/2011 3:18:00 PM
eeoooowwww, that poor hat infested with termites. It sounds like a true story? Gosh, i wish I could think of a hat tale to tell. This one is very difficult for me. I have no hats to tell of! LIke your writing of this topic. Luv, andrea
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Date: 3/12/2011 2:20:00 PM
Nice funny and humorous write, Tahera
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Date: 3/12/2011 11:57:00 AM
This poem made me laugh out loud, Tahera. We have to be careful where and how we store clothing. I actually had field mice "eat" my Christmas stocking when it was stored in the garage. Hats off to you for a great entry! Wishing you success. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/12/2011 6:05:00 AM
Oh Tahera how creative is this my friend.. your last line has me laughing out loud.. don't we all save our mementos .. to enjoy after years pass by.. only to find your last line..hahahahahahaha.. good luck in the contest my friend...
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