The Storm Water Pipe


The storm water pipe
gaped into open air
from an embankment 
where it surfaced
from underground.
The opening was a little
smaller than my childhood height
and they said it stretched
a mile or more but nobody
knew for sure.

A danger sign warned
against entry saying 
the pipe was subject to sudden
flooding - a protective grate
had a hole big enough
to crawl through. 
I would pause 
at its mouth and stare 
into a claustrophobic dark.

Hunched, heart racing,
I monkey walked
my way in, listening out
for water, breathing in 
the dank air. Deeper
and deeper I would go until 
courage left me when
the light from the entrance
faded and all went black.
Hell was there. 
It still is.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 7/10/2025 3:09:00 PM
Hello Paul, so perfectly shown that childhood urge to test boundaries, to peer into the unknown, even when every instinct is screaming to turn back. I love how you build the tension and the warning sign, the grate with just enough space to slip through, the air growing dank and heavy, the light fading behind you. It’s a journey not just into the pipe but into the heart of fear itself. Summer Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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Paul Willason
Date: 7/12/2025 6:21:00 AM
Thankyou Daniel, thoughtful and marvellously forensic comments as usual...always enjoy hearing from you. A few layers in this poem. Very much appreciate that you gave it some time. Take care my friend, Paul
Date: 7/10/2025 7:53:00 AM
For such a time as this. You captured the fear…of darkness…of flooding…of strange spaces…of death…of tragic death like the one in Texas.
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Paul Willason
Date: 7/12/2025 6:16:00 AM
Hi Kim, Indeed this poem enters the darker regions, both internal and external. Thankyou for your comments, the feedback is very much appreciated my friend.makes a difference. Regards, Paul
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