The Storm

A re-post of poem 939895 that mysteriously disappeared from PS...


The early morning darkness oozes melancholy whispers as enraged storm clouds enfold me in a final deathly embrace. She has come for me. I can feel her breathy torment breathe cold upon my beleaguered brow. A cautious glimpse through my bedroom window reveals the rage in her nictating blue eyes. Frozen to my pillow I watch in terror. Her minacious exhalations mesmerizing me. Like a beautiful child giddily watching weightless seeds float gently from blown Dandelions, I watch transfixed, as blinding fury strips leaves from trees, breaking limbs like snapping bones. The canopy twists in distorted grimaces her demented smile mirrored in each pained contortion, her wail echoed in the screams of trees. They bend and turn and pull their roots from the soil in vain attempts to escape her wrath. She has come for me! There is no escape. A swirling dance of death and destruction, bleeding droplets assail the glass. A thousand tiny fingers tapping, scratching, try to gain entrance into my final safe haven. I can feel her drawing ever closer, hovering above me, sniggering, her passion tempting me, seducing me, exulting in her conquest for she knows I can’t resist, draining from me my heart, my love, my life. Her cold dead fingers reach for me in my dream, stealing my essences, draining my soul, leaving nothing, a dying husk of what once was an ebullient life, a caring man. Then through the night a ray of brilliant light beams hope against darkness. The angel appears. Her words beckon me to fight against the demon, the seductress, the succubus. encouraging me, caressing me, With her agile wit and calm caring mind she soothes me. She comes for me, and I await her eagerly. Her laughter like the tinkle of sweet bells vanquishes my night terror, waking me from my dream. She comes for me, and I melt longingly into her comforting willowy embrace as the ravaging misery fights its final battle, destroying all that it can. With one last desperate breathe it screams curses into the night, while my sweet angel strokes me with her words and her beautiful blue eyes flash a brummagem smile.
09/15/2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 12/21/2017 10:34:00 AM
couldn't get over the black box down thing ... really couldn't even make it through this one ... reads way to thick for our taste ... oh yeah ... nice box ...
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James Inman
Date: 12/21/2017 1:32:00 PM
Thank you for the visit Molly but I am confused by your comment.
Date: 12/20/2017 10:08:00 PM
Powerful write, James. Vivid imagery. Love it.
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James Inman
Date: 12/21/2017 1:34:00 PM
Thank you Line.
Date: 12/12/2017 5:09:00 AM
Awesome write, James. Glad you reposted it and I was able to read it. Thank you.
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James Inman
Date: 12/12/2017 5:32:00 AM
Thank you Rhoda. This was about Hurricane Irma and a lovely person who kept me company until the power went out. I'm not sure what happened to the original post. It seemed to disappear. It was probably Irma coming back to haunt me.
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