The Storm

All was still,
As the birds headed for cover,
Sensing danger,
Quietness before the storm,
Rumbling noises started,
The clouds darkened,
The atmosphere electric,
Suddenly crashing thunderbolts,
Rapidly heating expansion of air,
Sheets of lightning flashing,
Across the angry night sky,
Causing devastation and destruction,
Anywhere it wanted,
Having no mercy,
Striking down trees,
Branches were broken off,
The winds blew a mighty hurricane,
Overturning everything in sight, 
The heavens were opened,
Rains poured down,
Turning into heavy pelting hailstones,
Bouncing hard against the ground,
Moving from town to town,
The storm was blowing off steam,
Releasing all its energy,
Until it burnt itself out,
When morning dawned,
Into a beautiful bright blue sky
So calm and peaceful,
Leaving the aftermath,

17/08/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Duet Avatar
August 19, 2016 at 10:28 PM
Wow! A great poetic description of a storm much like those we have here in Louisiana.
Rycroft Avatar
August 20, 2016 at 7:47 AM
Thank you, Carole xx
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August 19, 2016 at 2:43 PM
- Nature's forces may be really strong ...... storm makes me uneasy, never know what can happen - A wonderful poem, Wendy - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rycroft Avatar
August 19, 2016 at 3:33 PM
Thank you Sunshine xx
DiMino Avatar
August 19, 2016 at 10:48 AM
Yep! That's a storm alright. Great poetry, Wendy. Love the description. Need a hot bowl of soup now, though the Phoenix forecast is for 110 today:)
Rycroft Avatar
August 19, 2016 at 11:32 AM
Thank you, Joe I've not seen a storm since i was a young girl, I live in England ,
Roper Avatar
August 19, 2016 at 10:19 AM
I hate storms, Wendy, you have captured a lot of action going on enjoyed reading. Hugs Eve
Rycroft Avatar
August 19, 2016 at 10:42 AM
Thank you, Eve xxx
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August 17, 2016 at 9:32 PM
Really love the feel of this...
Rycroft Avatar
August 18, 2016 at 2:15 PM
Thank you Mike xx
Hagy Avatar
August 17, 2016 at 8:37 PM
Beautiful imagery...love the feel after a storm!
Rycroft Avatar
August 18, 2016 at 2:15 PM
Thank you Chris x
Dietrich Avatar
August 17, 2016 at 3:34 PM
great descriptive writing for that contest on nature. Keep up the good work.
Rycroft Avatar
August 17, 2016 at 4:01 PM
Thank you but I cannot find the contest, it's gone, think I was a bit late x
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