The Storm

A Storm rolled across the field,

Flashing lightning and thunder pealed.

The rain came crashing down,

and I almost nearly drown,

cause the top of my tent was not sealed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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February 6, 2012 at 12:15 AM
I like this a lot! I've been in this situation before, it's not fun! ;) well done
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February 7, 2012 at 4:27 PM
Thank you!!
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January 9, 2012 at 4:20 PM
o my.. not a camper much? thanks for the comment, I like your poem too.
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January 10, 2012 at 3:16 PM
Thank You!!!
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January 9, 2012 at 2:50 PM
LOL, good one!
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January 10, 2012 at 3:16 PM
Thank You!
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January 6, 2012 at 4:19 PM
This reminds me of the hit song by the Serendipity Singers "Don't Let the Rain Come Down". Looks like a good limerick.
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January 8, 2012 at 11:54 AM
Thank You
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