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The Storm

A Storm rolled across the field, Flashing lightning and thunder pealed. The rain came crashing down, and I almost nearly drown, cause the top of my tent was not sealed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/6/2012 12:15:00 AM
I like this a lot! I've been in this situation before, it's not fun! ;) well done
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Christopher Bunton
Date: 2/7/2012 4:27:00 PM
Thank you!!
Date: 1/9/2012 4:20:00 PM
o my.. not a camper much? thanks for the comment, I like your poem too.
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Christopher Bunton
Date: 1/10/2012 3:16:00 PM
Thank You!!!
Date: 1/9/2012 2:50:00 PM
LOL, good one!
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Christopher Bunton
Date: 1/10/2012 3:16:00 PM
Thank You!
Date: 1/6/2012 4:19:00 PM
This reminds me of the hit song by the Serendipity Singers "Don't Let the Rain Come Down". Looks like a good limerick.
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Christopher Bunton
Date: 1/8/2012 11:54:00 AM
Thank You