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The Storm

I lie awake, hearing the wind Winter, that coils in the breast of night Glides in from the fields, Eerie sounds through window sills When night, soon perishes into dawn A morning, slender and pale Still dark with shadowed swill Reveals such hapless sight The wretched carpet, rubble and plight Like broken wings from dark of night Finds limb and bough mere ghosts Of trees, battered, forsaken By violent rage of night

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/19/2010 3:06:00 AM
Reminds me of the passing of Katrina...when when we were only near the edge.
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Date: 1/28/2010 2:22:00 PM
your poem moves with poetic expression. What a raging wind-- very descriptive. -Susan Mills
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Date: 1/21/2010 8:28:00 AM
you brought the storm to the reader, Carrie and this is just awesome--felt like I was in the eye of the storm...
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Date: 1/21/2010 6:32:00 AM
Absolutely wonderful. Splendid in the sketch of the scene after a storm. You have penned a beautiful poem. Thanks. With best wishes and love Ravindra
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Date: 1/20/2010 12:29:00 PM
I so love your imagery you use, Carrie. This is yet another example of writing at its best. and thanks for what you said about my cat poem. Luv ya, andrea
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Date: 1/20/2010 9:40:00 AM
Your poetry was a pleasure to read today Carrie. I hope you have a wonderful day filled with love and inspiration. May we all be able to read your poetry here at PoetrySoup for years to come. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/20/2010 12:32:00 AM
One of your best Carrie.Well captured images.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.
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Date: 1/19/2010 9:25:00 PM
I read in a book entitled "Ireland" that (and I paraphrase), "There is no such thing as writing a poem. The ones we call poets, true poets, are merely keen listeners who have learned to recognize when a poem is dropping by." You, Carrie, are what I call a true poet. You have learned to recognize the fait whisper of a poem as it envelops you, learned to embrace its nature, and have developed a heart for its life. Thanks so much for this wonderful poem
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Date: 1/19/2010 2:50:00 PM
Truly enjoyed Carrie, my kind of write. Hey, I get the pleasure of being the first one to comment, smile. Reminds me of when I was a young one ever listening to the wind and all my senses becoming full from forest sounds. Every now and then my imagination would get the best of me. Thanks for sharing your amazing poetry. Take care, Love Light Patty
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