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The Storm

The rain is coming down It’s pouring like a faucet from the sky Beating on the metal roof To the point where nothing can be dry I walk to the window that reveals the storm Droplets pounding on the dirt road Turning it into a sea of mud It seems as if the sky is going to explode I can feel the passion of the storm in my bones The clatter drowns out every other sound I can barely hear myself think It feels as if I could drown I can barely see out of the window Blurring my vision of the world When the wind suddenly picks up, The trees seemed to be hurled These sounds are so comforting It brings me peace as the steady flow Then it starts to decrease And the fiery passion starts to slow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/11/2009 4:02:00 PM
welcome to the Soup!We are of a mind please read my Immersion....your form is rhyme and perhaps quatrain Light & Love
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Date: 6/9/2009 5:46:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Harlee. I am hoping to read many more poems written by you. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/6/2009 12:00:00 PM
Nice use of imagery and rhyme. You may want to change the category from I don't know to rhyme. You can do this by going to your poem and use the edit. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 6/5/2009 9:46:00 AM
There's something beautiful and deep about a storm and you've captured that. -one love.
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Date: 6/4/2009 3:17:00 PM
Wonderful poem Harlee, welcome to the soup>James
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