The Storm

The storm brews in horizon hues Lurking in gray, ominous skies Prepare to pay your dues Thunder claps, as the heart cries Lurking in gray, ominous skies An attack is now underway Thunder claps, as the heart cries Hold onto what you want to say An attack is now underway Stay strong, stand against the blowing force Hold onto what you want to say Focus and live to stay on course Stay strong against the blowing force Have faith and follow the light Focus and live to stay on course Let there be no never-ending night Have faith and follow the light Prepare to pay your dues Let there be no never-ending night The storm brews in horizon hues Heidi Sands 5/5/22

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Joseph May

Date: 5/17/2022 12:13:00 PM

Weathering the storm. Very micely penned Heidi, best wishes

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/17/2022 12:21:00 PM

Thank you Joseph. I hope you have a nice afternoon :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 5/16/2022 3:24:00 PM

A wonderful write on this Pantoum. Love the line... have faith and follow the light. love phyl

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/16/2022 4:05:00 PM

Thank you Phyllis. I appreciate your comment :)

Anil Deo

Date: 5/15/2022 10:43:00 PM

Congrats on a widely, meaningful poem. It wRns Putin & other arrogant rulers, too. ThanX for your encouragement yesterday. U have a good heart the way Jesus teaches. Shalom shalom

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/16/2022 7:27:00 AM

Thank you Anil :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/15/2022 11:28:00 AM

Hello Heidi, the last two verses speaks to me. Hugs.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/16/2022 10:42:00 AM

Hello Heidi, You are welcome. Hugs.

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/15/2022 4:47:00 PM

I am happy to hear that Darlene. Thank you. I hope you have a nice evening :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/15/2022 11:21:00 AM

You penned such a superb pantoum, Heidi. Your rhyme and geat dictation shed more enchantment on your poem, and I'm sure Milton will appreciate this. Best for a win.

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/15/2022 11:22:00 AM

Thank you very much Sotto. I appreciate your support. I hope you have a nice day :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/15/2022 10:16:00 AM

Splendid write Heidi. I like the rhymes and the images of storm---thunder on gray skies...

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/15/2022 10:40:00 AM

Thank you very much Vijay. I hope you have a nice afternoon and maybe get to see the Lunar eclipse tonight :)