Heidi Sands Poet Pantoum

The Storm

The storm brews in horizon hues
Lurking in gray, ominous skies
Prepare to pay your dues
Thunder claps, as the heart cries

Lurking in gray, ominous skies
An attack is now underway
Thunder claps, as the heart cries
Hold onto what you want to say

An attack is now underway
Stay strong, stand against the blowing force
Hold onto what you want to say
Focus and live to stay on course

Stay strong against the blowing force
Have faith and follow the light
Focus and live to stay on course
Let there be no never-ending night

Have faith and follow the light
Prepare to pay your dues
Let there be no never-ending night
The storm brews in horizon hues

Heidi Sands

5/5/22

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Joseph May May 17, 2022 at 12:13 PM Weathering the storm. Very micely penned Heidi, best wishes Heidi Sands May 17, 2022 at 12:21 PM Thank you Joseph. I hope you have a nice afternoon :)

Phyllis Babcock May 16, 2022 at 3:24 PM A wonderful write on this Pantoum. Love the line... have faith and follow the light. love phyl Heidi Sands May 16, 2022 at 4:05 PM Thank you Phyllis. I appreciate your comment :)

Anil Deo May 15, 2022 at 10:43 PM Congrats on a widely, meaningful poem. It wRns Putin & other arrogant rulers, too. ThanX for your encouragement yesterday. U have a good heart the way Jesus teaches. Shalom shalom Heidi Sands May 16, 2022 at 7:27 AM Thank you Anil :)

Darlene De Beaulieu May 15, 2022 at 11:28 AM Hello Heidi, the last two verses speaks to me. Hugs. Darlene De Beaulieu May 16, 2022 at 10:42 AM Hello Heidi, You are welcome. Hugs. Heidi Sands May 15, 2022 at 4:47 PM I am happy to hear that Darlene. Thank you. I hope you have a nice evening :)

Sotto Poet May 15, 2022 at 11:21 AM You penned such a superb pantoum, Heidi. Your rhyme and geat dictation shed more enchantment on your poem, and I'm sure Milton will appreciate this. Best for a win. Heidi Sands May 15, 2022 at 11:22 AM Thank you very much Sotto. I appreciate your support. I hope you have a nice day :)

Vijay Pandit May 15, 2022 at 10:16 AM Splendid write Heidi. I like the rhymes and the images of storm---thunder on gray skies... Heidi Sands May 15, 2022 at 10:40 AM Thank you very much Vijay. I hope you have a nice afternoon and maybe get to see the Lunar eclipse tonight :)