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There are three little words on tiny stones strewn along the floor of a never-ending stream which runs through a misty moor. A marvelous moor of uncertainty where mysteriously all are led to cross a flowing water all humanity must tread. Those three little words like pebbles thrown by children just for sport randomly and carelessly bear no great import. Flung into streams, they become the water’s bed. They represent what everyone to someone else has surely said. As you cross the water, you’ll feel those rocks underfoot. Inconsequential to your journey, they’ll stay where they were put. But some are blessed who as they wade across that little river Catch a gleam from beneath the stream such that sends a shiver. Something glistening through the ripples impelling them to freeze, to search among the other stones, to get down on their knees. And as they stoop with hands outstretched, they strain to catch the ray which from the depths of murkiness shines to show the way. Their fingers reach through icy cold, the other stones ignored until they grasp that precious one to be their best reward! They bring it from the water; its light fills up the sky. Its color irridescent; they laugh until they cry. They look for the “I love you” which on ordinary stones is inscribed. but instead of the three little words is a feeling that can’t be described. They find themselves transported onto another plane, alone with their own beloved away from all the mundane. Perhaps to fields of gold. Some to glens of green. But each who is transported finds happiness serene. Love that lasts a lifetime: unselfish, truthful and kind, which strives to rekindle passion and fun while expanding the mind. This is the love most sacred while in the stream we walk treading upon the pebbles that only know how to talk. We must walk on continuously with that one stone to seek because it gives the soul much more than just three words can speak. Jan. 17, 2017 For Jamie Pan's contest: How Long can a poetry go Writer's Statement: This is an extended metaphor poem which should be very obvious to the reader. We hear the words “I love you” said by many people throughout our lives and we hear it being tossed about like pebbles also in movies and tv shows. I think all of us are searching for the “real thing.” Therefore, we should try to ignore people whose “I love you” is often falsely said. They are the common stones. In verse four, I describe what it feels like to come across true love, or at least the illusion of it. We stop and notice its brightness because it outshines the others. In verse three, I mentioned “SOME are blessed” to find this stone. Many may think they have found it, but I believe very few actually find it. In verses five to seven I use adjectives and phrases to describe its great beauty because true love is the most valuable thing I think we can find in life. I conclude in verse eight with a summary, explaining that it is important to find the stone most valuable because it gives so much to the soul. We should ignore false love and tread on it like we would on common pebbles which only speak of love but which do not prolong passion and fun in one’s life or expand the mind. The title is "The Stone Unturned" because with 50% divorce rate and many other couples in unhappy living arrangements, I believe most do not find everlasting happy love. They have left that stone unturned.

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Date: 4/29/2017 6:46:00 PM
Wow! This poem speaks to my life. What you wrote here is so powerful, "Love that lasts a lifetime: unselfish, truthful and kind, which strives to rekindle passion and fun while expanding the mind." I think that's what marraige should be about however, in most cases it's not. Some people just don't want to grow and we waist so much time on people and relationships that just are a waste of time and energy. This is a great write, it really speaks to the heart of the matter. Great job!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/29/2017 7:23:00 PM
So glad you liked it, Tanesha. I think most of us never find a love like this. Just substitutes that may come close to it if we are lucky!
Date: 1/21/2017 12:20:00 AM
Well done and deep. This would also work in the same guy's metaphor contest. I admire the profound thought behind the pen in each verse. Impressive ... CayCay
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Date: 1/19/2017 10:50:00 AM
Need I say outstanding - a regular artistic homily on love's meaning. I will read this one again many times. Love, daver
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Date: 1/19/2017 8:19:00 AM
A great metophor. Some hunger to hear the words from that certain person who it seems lacks the capacity of expression. So they pick up the meaningless stones on the beach to try and satisfy that hunger. Congrats on your win Andrea.
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Date: 1/19/2017 6:00:00 AM
I agree with Connie, many have found their true love but don't work at it because love isn't easy.
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Date: 1/19/2017 4:07:00 AM
Wow Andrea. Big congratulations on a deserving win my friend! You will know it is true love when they put your desires before their own and love unconditionally. : ) 7 loved your explanation...
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Date: 1/18/2017 11:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this amazing poem that speaks of true love in a very insightful way.
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Date: 1/18/2017 9:31:00 PM
Congrats on a fine win Andrea
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Date: 1/18/2017 4:12:00 PM
Hi Andrea, I agree that those three little words are often thrown around without much thought for their true meaning or how/where they are directed. Your imagery of how one feels when deep love is felt and acknowledged and lived is right on. Thanks for a very thoughtful poem, Kathy
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Date: 1/18/2017 3:11:00 PM
A very thoughtful and endearing poem, Andrea. A unique addendum also. Gives the poet the opportunity to share their thoughts w/the readers as to the meaning in their poems. I loved both the poem and your expressed thoughts and meaning behind the words in your poem. Excellent on all levels. A Souper 7 for sure. Love and peace to you.
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Date: 1/18/2017 11:17:00 AM
so heartfelt and made to uplift the highest level of actualization.. my entry ( 'shutting off') pales in comparison with yours , andie...this is ace; i like the stone unturned!.. huggs and talk soon
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Date: 1/18/2017 10:40:00 AM
Great depth and insight expressed...Well penned
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Date: 1/18/2017 9:34:00 AM
I think this is a very unique contest because of its concept, and I must say that I enjoy writer's statements more than I thought I would beforehand. I like yours a lot, Andrea. It's fun to read a sort of explanation to a poem.
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Date: 1/18/2017 9:26:00 AM
So beautiful Andrea... Loved it... What you said is absolutely true ... Loved the title too,its apt...A big 7 ...
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