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The Stillness of Nature

 
I woke to the birds singing, and distant church bells ringing; my bedroom was sunshine hued, it gave me a calm still mood. Soon, I walked a lush green path, in nature I hold no wrath; I love the wandering vines, and flowers colored like wines. Love the stillness and deep hush, caressed by natures paint brush; I just breath in a sweet scene, and I am filled with serene. I come upon a blue stream, peaceful, tranquil as a dream; ducks float among grass reeds, happy to eat water weeds. Only God could create this, this heaven on earth and bliss; the trees form a church ceiling, for my praying and healing. So, when seeking deep, deep thoughts, and to unravel life's knots; I find myself in nature, talking to Buddha-nature. ________________________ April 12, 2023 Poetry/Jueju/Qijue/The Stillness of Nature Copyright Protected, ID 04-1539-061-12 All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France Written for the Premiere contest, Write A Jueju-Qijue sponsor, Emile Pinet, Judged 05/22/2023 Second Place
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Peck Avatar
May 24, 2023 at 8:31 AM
Beautiful and serene. Congratulations!
La France Avatar
May 24, 2023 at 4:26 PM
Ann, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations !
Kendrick Avatar
May 24, 2023 at 7:23 AM
Congratulations on this winning work in Emile's contest. Way to go. Creative work for sure. Sara
La France Avatar
May 24, 2023 at 7:26 AM
Sara, thank you so much for the congratulations and compliment !
Dietrich Avatar
May 23, 2023 at 2:52 PM
So lovely, Constance. Congrats on your well deserved win
La France Avatar
May 24, 2023 at 7:23 AM
Andrea, thank you so much for the compliment and congrats !
Pinet Avatar
May 22, 2023 at 10:51 AM
Congratulations Constance! Your Jueju-Qijue poem "The Stillness of Nature" has placed "Second" in my contest. This contest was difficult, yet your poem stood out and captured my heart, with its tranquil beauty. Very well done, my friend, Emile.
La France Avatar
May 23, 2023 at 10:04 AM
Emile, thank you so much for the contest and inspiration and my wonderful placement, and for the congratulations and compliment !
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April 13, 2023 at 7:20 PM
Beautiful calming poetry in Jueju form Constance, there nothing as serene as the stillness of nature… Belle
La France Avatar
April 13, 2023 at 10:58 PM
Belle, thank you so much for the lovely comment !
Goldsmith Avatar
April 13, 2023 at 9:56 AM
"The Stillness of Nature" is a lovely write/picture. I really enjoyed this one. Good Luck. Have a blessed day writing away..............
La France Avatar
April 13, 2023 at 2:32 PM
Paula, thank you so much for the compliment !
Dietrich Avatar
April 12, 2023 at 1:19 PM
Looks like you are off to a wonderful start, Dear heart!
La France Avatar
April 12, 2023 at 2:25 PM
Andrea, thank you so much for the compliment, it was a peaceful poem to write !
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