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The Stillness of My Heart

The Stillness of my Heart If love be not thy name of the true sparrow's sweet songs sung Mountains not melodically moved, nor rivers recite your name Then a stillness in my heart erupts the silence in my soul 14- 16- 15 Syllable count May.26.2018 Sijo Poem Sponsored by: Heidi Sands

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Date: 6/13/2018 10:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win! Masterful!
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Date: 6/2/2018 10:25:00 PM
Lovely. Congrats on your top win, WW.
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Date: 6/2/2018 1:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win with your beautifully written Sijo. :))
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Date: 6/2/2018 12:32:00 PM
Hello Winged Warrior,this a beautiful poem. Oh do think these words to be true. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 6/1/2018 12:48:00 PM
This is incredibly well-penned! Congrats on capturing top spot, WW!
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Date: 6/1/2018 6:34:00 AM
- Congratulations on your Sijo poem, W.W. :) - hugs and happy weekend // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/1/2018 6:10:00 AM
Back with congrats WW..well deserved top win.
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Date: 6/1/2018 5:35:00 AM
Lovely! A winner! Congrats on a much deserved top placement, WW!
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Date: 5/31/2018 11:45:00 PM
Beautiful poem WW. Congratulations for your top win! Thank you for entering my contest :)
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Date: 5/28/2018 3:22:00 PM
AMAZING Sijo. Sure to top the winners list.Elaine
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Date: 5/28/2018 2:33:00 PM
wow, beautiful and profound. Hope it wins, WW.
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Date: 5/28/2018 5:44:00 AM
Wondrous write. So beautiful...thanks for sharing. Write on! =)
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Date: 5/27/2018 10:40:00 PM
Well done -JT
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Date: 5/26/2018 9:18:00 PM
WoW! WW, What a good entry for the contest. I agree with Arturo, this is well written and poetic. I wish you the best luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 5/26/2018 6:21:00 PM
Very poetic...It's lovely to read you...All the best WW
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Date: 5/26/2018 2:34:00 PM
I kind of like this. Good luck.
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Date: 5/26/2018 12:27:00 PM
Your silence a poetic roar my friend, WW!
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Date: 5/26/2018 8:34:00 AM
Sounds so serene..
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Date: 5/26/2018 6:34:00 AM
very beautiful and I love the pics ^WW^. I am not that familiar with the form, good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 5/26/2018 5:44:00 AM
Lovely WW..sounds lyrical..best for a BIG win.
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