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The Stars

The ***** burns bright **** set afire A *** the universe is **** and ***** holes ****** from beyond In the ***** of the abscess we *** all within **** minds ah *** ** *** *** *** ****** **** ***** God ***** ***** ** *** **** ***** **** in the ********* **** ***** Then Twilight becomes **** and ***** *** ******** **** explodes in ****** **** then *** ****** winds

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Date: 10/1/2018 5:16:00 PM
got to give this five ***** lol, open to so much interpretation lol:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/29/2018 3:56:00 PM
Very creative, Arthur. You test our intelligence! Let me have a go at the first part: "The flame burns bright, soul set afire//Afar the universe is vast and dense holes appear from beyond.// ... will give the next visitor a chance to carry on:) Regards // paul
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Date: 9/29/2018 8:30:00 AM
I continue to learn from your talented pen, my friend! You are indeed a poet extraordinaire! Such profound words and artistry - wonderful as always! Love and hugs. Pandita
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Date: 9/29/2018 7:23:00 AM
The diner burns bright food set afire A day the universe is dark and black holes emerge from beyond In the tooth of the abscess we are all within weak minds ah man or men can eat thirty more beans God helps those in the John shorts fill in the sanctuary down below Then Twilight becomes loud and farts and releases crap explodes in neither pond then all vision winds
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Date: 9/29/2018 12:25:00 AM
* **** ** ***** *** ******* *** **** *** ********** ** ***** ** ********* ****-*** **
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Date: 9/28/2018 4:34:00 PM
yeowww, arthur... now, i have to fill in the blanks... star-struck!...huggs
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Date: 9/28/2018 6:25:00 AM
***** (5 star review)
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Date: 9/28/2018 3:37:00 AM
The typing of a poem has never seemed this profound before to my eyes; this is an excellent idea. Thank you for executing it, and teaching me! It all makes sense, and it seems to help the twilight explode into the wind.....
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Date: 9/28/2018 1:41:00 AM
Art V****o, you're such **** dope :D
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Date: 9/28/2018 3:39:00 AM
LOL you forgot a star! LOL is stupid dope!!!