The Stairs

Our B&B room, 2 flights up,
Was fine for us at first,
Until the freeze arrived and then
Those feelings were reversed.

For when we left our room to get
Some early exercise,
The stairs and handrails wore a coat
Of ice, a real surprise.

We aren’t young and what we knew
Quite strongly in our guts
Was that attempts to get downstairs
Would land us on our butts.

The hosts were not around and so
We waited ‘til we felt
The sun perform its magic
As the ice began to melt.

An hour later, we could leave,
The lesson paramount,
That age has consequences
We must take into account.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Wolf Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 6:40 PM
Now every season is 'Fall' for us. ~ Nothing to Laugh at
Bauer Avatar
February 23, 2023 at 5:38 PM
Ha! Great comment, Gershon!
Turner Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 4:29 PM
Always a pleasure to read you, Ilene. Ice, cold and old age simply does not mix.
Bauer Avatar
February 23, 2023 at 5:39 PM
Thank you, Daniel! You are right about that!
Nuwas Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 4:04 PM
Lovely poem, I sure do want to grow old, as if If I have a choice :)
Bauer Avatar
February 23, 2023 at 5:42 PM
Enjoy whatever age you’re at, Aysha, and thank you for taking the time to comment…
Rodrigues Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 3:09 PM
You are wise for to fall on our butts at an older age can ruin the quality of our lives and of course a good vacation!
Bauer Avatar
February 23, 2023 at 5:43 PM
Ha! Well put, Kim!
Cunningham Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 1:57 PM
So true Ilene, our minds may still be 20 but our bodies think iotherwise, enjoy your vacation. Tom
Bauer Avatar
February 23, 2023 at 5:44 PM
Thank you, Tom! Sometimes it’s strange to realize that we’ve gotten to the age we have!
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