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STAGE BENEATH HER FEET* ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
before the lights ignite, she stands, a silhouette of dreams, silk slippers whispering against the wood. the stage, her steadfast confidant, is the only applause she ever needs. how the world adores the spectacle, the pirouettes that seem to float, the leaps that defy gravity! beyond spotlight is the quiet joy of motion, the grace of being, the art of losing oneself. each twirl, a conversation with the air, each leap, a promise to the crowd. dancing is a wrapped gift opened in the silence between the notes. she dances not for their gaze, but for the stage that cradles her spirit. she dances for the magic of movement as if she were born to sway in the arms of the music, the notes swirling like autumn leaves. *This poem written in remembrance of my aunt, Ann Etgen-Atkinson, a prima ballerina, who recently passed. She dedicated her life to ballet, first as a performer then later as a ballet teacher, choreographer, and original owner of the Dallas Metropolitcan Ballet.

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Date: 8/6/2025 7:18:00 PM
This is a wonderful tribute to your aunt... Seems you've gone a little 'ape' over squirrels though. ~ Magilla Gorilla
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Date: 8/6/2025 2:31:00 PM
beautiful remembrance and tribute to your aunt and to the beauty and pleasure of dancing.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/6/2025 5:17:00 PM
thank you, David. Glad you liked it...have a pleasant evening, Sara
Date: 8/6/2025 2:19:00 PM
"how the world adores the spectacle, the pirouettes that seem to float, the leaps that defy gravity!" -- Beautiful Poetry! "she dances not for their gaze, but for the stage that cradles her spirit." For hers and God's pleasure for whom we are all created. Great writing! A FAV!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/6/2025 5:18:00 PM
thank you, Joe, for your kind and enthusiastic words. They mean a great deal to me as does the FAV...much appreciate you and your visits...have a blessed evening, Sara
Date: 8/6/2025 8:27:00 AM
What a graceful, reverent tribute! I love the way the stage becomes a confidant, a sacred space where the dancer communes with something greater than applause. And the line “dancing is a wrapped gift opened / in the silence between the notes”—there’s so much emotional weight there. It’s deeply poetic, but also philosophically rich. Excellent piece, Sara.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/6/2025 5:19:00 PM
thank you, Mickey. Your enthusiastic and complimentary words made my evening. I'm grateful your found the piece well crafted. It was a joy to write. Wishing you a pleasant evening, Sara
Date: 8/6/2025 6:49:00 AM
Wow!! Such a successful person in her lifetime. I like to see the performers on stage with such grace. I can't imagine the pain that they might feel as their body ages, and the damage begins to show from the abuse of their body, feet and legs. I appreciate those who love ballet and do it despite what happens to their bodies. Thanks for sharing this with us and such a cute accompanying artwork. Sara K
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/6/2025 5:15:00 PM
thanks for your insights about ballet dancers...tis true, their bodies endure so much pain that does catch up with them as they age. I remember the first time I saw my aunt's feet and toes from wearing toe shoes...what a contrast to her beautiful tutu and her graceful performance. Appreciate your visit and thoughtful words. Have a blessed evening, Sara
Date: 8/6/2025 5:35:00 AM
Beautiful tribute, Sara ! Really enjoyed the line : the stage that cradles her spirit- can relate to poem as my daughter was a dancer. X.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/6/2025 5:13:00 PM
thanks for stopping by, Ghairo, and for your kind words. I was never a dancer, but spent weekends watching my aunt perform, awestruck with her grace. enjoy your evening, Sara

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