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Inspited by a wise and kind poet here on Soup, White Wolf, here is his poem, enlightening, and poetry is ofen an analogy, however in some cases no clarification, will keep an extremist silent.

https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/the_final_frontier_1040321

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Slaying all bible verse
He danced his words to heights
He was
The one

He never grew
The child always fresh
He had no lovers
Only fans

Death came inside a tear
Loneliness incubated fears
Dancing on the moon
Alone

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Connie Marcum Wong

August 8, 2018 at 4:29 AM

I was moved, especially by your last stanza Arthur. xxoo

White Wolf

August 6, 2018 at 12:22 PM

Michael couldn't comment he tells me, a problem with technology upstairs. But he told me to leave an anagram for him and that you'd know what it meant: to my M, her donuts too.

Arturo Michael

August 6, 2018 at 12:19 PM

Yet the greatest lover...Nice write Arthur ....All the best

Tom Cunningham

August 6, 2018 at 12:00 PM

Well written verse Arthur, love your notes too. Tom

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

August 6, 2018 at 8:19 AM

I like it xomo

Tim Smith

August 6, 2018 at 6:11 AM

Amazing. You speak succinctly with purpose

Arthur Vaso

August 6, 2018 at 10:02 PM

Ah Tim you know all the travels I have made all the systems I have seen! Thank you.

Jan Allison

August 6, 2018 at 2:49 AM

Fab poem Arthur and I loved the poets notes and pic I didn't realise there was so much in the bible not picked it up since I was a kid and that is not likely to change as I'm not a believer Particularly love the final quote from Proverbs, wise words indeed. :-) hugs Jan xx

White Wolf

August 6, 2018 at 2:42 AM

Could do an Ogham on these proverbs. Lol... For such a succinct poem, you have done an amazing job. I think I'll simply have to fav this one! Yes, I shall... it should have been rum not wine. Lol

Eve Roper

August 6, 2018 at 2:38 AM

Lovely, Arthur, Hugs Eve

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