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Inspited by a wise and kind poet here on Soup, White Wolf, here is his poem, enlightening, and poetry is ofen an analogy, however in some cases no clarification, will keep an extremist silent.

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Slaying all bible verse He danced his words to heights He was The one He never grew The child always fresh He had no lovers Only fans Death came inside a tear Loneliness incubated fears Dancing on the moon Alone

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/8/2018 4:29:00 AM

I was moved, especially by your last stanza Arthur. xxoo

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/7/2018 8:28:00 AM

Poor fellow! Reading the Bible verses is a good refresher. I can honestly say I have breached a number of these instructions. I do try to hold my tongue but at times it has a life of its own.

White Wolf

Date: 8/6/2018 12:22:00 PM

Michael couldn't comment he tells me, a problem with technology upstairs. But he told me to leave an anagram for him and that you'd know what it meant: to my M, her donuts too.

Arturo Michael

Date: 8/6/2018 12:19:00 PM

Yet the greatest lover...Nice write Arthur ....All the best

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/6/2018 12:00:00 PM

Well written verse Arthur, love your notes too. Tom

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 8/6/2018 8:19:00 AM

I like it xomo

Tim Smith

Date: 8/6/2018 6:11:00 AM

Amazing. You speak succinctly with purpose

Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/6/2018 10:02:00 PM

Ah Tim you know all the travels I have made all the systems I have seen! Thank you.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/6/2018 2:49:00 AM

Fab poem Arthur and I loved the poets notes and pic I didn't realise there was so much in the bible not picked it up since I was a kid and that is not likely to change as I'm not a believer Particularly love the final quote from Proverbs, wise words indeed. :-) hugs Jan xx

White Wolf

Date: 8/6/2018 2:42:00 AM

Could do an Ogham on these proverbs. Lol... For such a succinct poem, you have done an amazing job. I think I'll simply have to fav this one! Yes, I shall... it should have been rum not wine. Lol

Eve Roper

Date: 8/6/2018 2:38:00 AM

Lovely, Arthur, Hugs Eve