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THE SQUIRREL'S WILD RIDE

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ With acorns stashed and tail afluff, he climbed the ramp—enough’s enough! The coaster loomed, a metal beast, yet rodents crave adventure’s feast. The harness snapped (a nervous squeak), the tracks began their groaning creak. Up, up, up—then WHOOOSH! he fell, his tiny paws gripping the carousel.
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Gauthier Avatar
March 27, 2026 at 10:14 AM
lovely tempo ~ reads delightfully well
Goldsmith Avatar
March 11, 2026 at 12:01 PM
I  enjoyed reading your fun "THE SQUIRREL'S WILD RIDE" write. What a cute/pretty/great picture you have here. Did you get my SoupMail??? Have a fun day writing away.............
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