The Sprigs and Spirit of Sistine -13

Sshhhhh!!!
Wait patiently
I don't want the stars to overhear us,
they'll fuss like phantoms
if they hear the future between us,
you know, I began as a palmist in Persia
the money was good, the hand lines were thick
and the future didn't waste time on lies
but if the king's court caught you crusading, 
if they heard hersey of heresy
from the palmistry you provided to the people
then they'd cut your hands off,
okay, I found the oracle of the Alpha and the Omega...

J.A.B.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 5/23/2025 5:23:00 PM
This one whispers with danger and revelation--utterly magnetic. “If they heard hersey of heresy / from the palmistry…” is brilliant wordplay, sharp as prophecy. And “Sshhhhh!!!”--what an entrance. You thread ancient fear and divine knowing like a poet-priest with smoke on his tongue.
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Date: 9/23/2017 1:47:00 AM
Just a little secret is all.... ;) this put a smile on my face. As a reader, I am hushed with anticipation, thrilled by such an ambitious piece such as this. Always, Laura
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Justin Bordner
Date: 10/3/2017 6:56:00 PM
Thrilling you pleases me deeply Poetess...Playful, nostalgic, and prophetic is she whom whispers in the shadows of coming souls' songs...the Persian Sybil looks and feels so eccentric to me, friendly, experienced, and fragile Laura...J.A.B.
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