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The Spoon

and a mobile howitzer (a mortar track) 
had blown-up,
nothing remained,  except the flattened 
bottom;
and what was left of the crew,  you could 
have scooped up with a spoon:

and when  I asked the priest,  where their 
souls had gone;  those that heard, sucked a tooth
and called  me a "goddam hippy,"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/14/2015 11:52:00 AM
Vividly moving, Peter - as always!! Hope you are well! :) john.
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