The Splendor of the Stars

He crossed the room toward the door as evening fell, 
the daylight slowly fading and spilling on the floor 
     in pools of black. 
The child was still there on the stoop, mewling and 
wriggling in her basket, an urchin, so pathetic and alone, 
abandoned like a buried memory.
He took her in his arms and held her close;
his touch would bring her comfort
like a well-remembered song as he bathed her 
by the fire and dressed her warm.
The lovelight in her eyes, uncompromising, 
     took his breath away.
Older folks should live their lives this way,
invest their souls with such unwavering devotion
that there is no need for worry, or cause for anger,
just the pure and perfect eloquence of faith.

She took some nourishment and grew stronger;
the seasons waxed and waned and no one 
came to claim her, so they became sufficient 
to themselves, anticipating one another's wants 
     and needs.
Up on the the high ground they would wonder 
at the heavens as they strolled by waters 
shimmering in starlight, dazzling their eyes 
     to tears of happiness. 
Storms beset them, and still they bore it all 
like two creatures who have come to trust  
     the power of their love.
Sunlight crossed to starlight, he grew sad 
     and incomplete. 
His mind left him, struggling and blind, 
as time drifted by like a slow and gentle stream.

She cared for him now, as he had cared for her 
so many years before, caressing his brow, 
bringing light to his dark eyes, and she wept quietly 
when her friend at last departed.

Alone she settled to her thoughts like a child 
wrapped in a blanket and slept, 
remembering his kindnesses and strength.
Finally she gave in to her loss, no longer able 
to endure the pain of grief. The Father blessed her, 
held her in his arms and re-united them, 
forever, in the splendor of the stars.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 2/19/2009 11:21:00 PM
Wow, this is sad but such a beautiful write. I got teary eyes. I thought it was excellent Keith. If I could rate past 7, I'd give you a 20+
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Date: 12/11/2008 4:50:00 AM
What an incredibly beautiful story! So stirring that my eyes are blurred as I write this. Thank you so much for your comments on my haiku "Storm-weary" and I love your seagull story! What an awesome thing to happen! ~Juliane
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Date: 12/10/2008 4:00:00 PM
You have woven a touching tale here. The beauty and essence of what loving and caring should be, tenderly written. Beautiful phrasing throughout and great imagery. Excellent write. Thank you always for your comments. Love Robin
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Date: 12/10/2008 12:16:00 PM
Great poem, excellent flow. I definitely look forward to reading more of your work =).
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Date: 12/10/2008 2:51:00 AM
Wow, what an epic tale that is close to my heart. My beloved Gran went totally blind, and was so for the last 12 years of her life, it is unbearable to see, and there are no words to describe my longing for her to see. an awesome poem, beautiful!!! Love, Kristin
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Date: 12/10/2008 12:19:00 AM
This is absolutely awesome! The images you pen are breathtakingly moving. I love 'the lovelight in her eyes uncompromising/took his breath away'. I can see her! Bravo sir.
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