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The Spirits of Autumn

The leaves are woven into a colorful tapestry by the spirits of autumn. Sundown brings cold air, frost, and memories of campfires from when I was young. Geese call from dark skies and tell me of their loneliness. I tell them I have friends, near by... and far away. But the geese ignore me and keep on calling And their cries follow them into the night.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/17/2009 5:44:00 AM
and their cries follow me into the night..would bring the reader back into the drama..instead of leaving him/her as the observer. Love it. Debbie
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Date: 2/8/2009 10:58:00 PM
Very nostalgic James and the placement reminds me of a flock of geese taking off following the leader. Thank you for your comments on my poem. Joyce
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Date: 2/5/2009 7:25:00 AM
This reminds me of a feather or the wings of the geese. Love the images you create xhere for this read and the form is lovely. Michael
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