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The Spirit of Darkness


the winds breathe in evenings soul of darkness
and night comes trailing a gown, black and velvety
  inky  i n k y  black, deeply mysterious and moonless
      an endless canopy
      a deathlike silence
      a nightingale song calls
           somewhere     a night owl hoots
                           hoot  hoot  h o o t  HOOT . . .
        lucid silence,
            a quiescence.
N I G H T-   a time for prayer and for weeping
the spirit of darkness comes creep   c r e e p i n g
  in the quietness and stillness my sleepy eyes close
                          and I pull the curtain of . . . . repose

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May 04, 2023


Poetry/Free Verse/the spirit of darkness
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Date: 5/6/2023 3:18:00 PM
This is beautiful!! Loved it!
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Constance La France
Date: 5/6/2023 7:33:00 PM
Paige, thank you so much for the lovely compliment !
Date: 5/5/2023 8:27:00 AM
Excellent, Constance, very moving:)
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Constance La France
Date: 5/6/2023 7:33:00 PM
Jo, thank you so much for the nice compliment !
Date: 5/4/2023 11:34:00 AM
Great dark deep piece of writing Constance, such fine imagery and as well as telling this so emotionally too. Blessings always,Gordon
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Constance La France
Date: 5/4/2023 2:32:00 PM
Gordon, thank you so much for the comment and compliment, blessings!
Date: 5/4/2023 9:42:00 AM
Constance, this is one of the most moving poems I've read in days. Not just in the sorrowful message, but also in form and the increase of size and spacing of "inky," "hoot" and "creeping." Impressive expressions that gave credence to your emotions. Well done!
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Constance La France
Date: 5/4/2023 2:34:00 PM
Lin, thank you so much for the lovely compliment and comment. !

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