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The Spirit Flows

The Spirit Flows





                                             Hunger
                                         Painful Empty
                              Yearning, Desiring, Longing   
                    Appetite, Weakness, Abundance, Copiousness      
                                   Filling, Growing, Obtaining
                                     Augmentable, Full
                                            Overflow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Devonshire Avatar
October 19, 2009 at 8:21 PM
Excellent diamante, Sara! I love the way your words take us from "Hunger" to "Overflow." Very nicely done! Love, Carolyn
Lacey Avatar
October 8, 2009 at 12:31 PM
one sure can grow from pain!!
Culverhouse Avatar
October 7, 2009 at 5:55 PM
your are makeing me hongree!!
Golden Avatar
October 7, 2009 at 5:35 PM
Fantastic diamante, Sara! Have a blessed day! Donna
Nunn Avatar
October 7, 2009 at 10:16 AM
Nothing worse than hunger pains!!!! Great write Thanks for the comment on the poems today..the one about the Bobcat was a true story, one almost go me once like that..Old sayin, " It is the Christan thing to do but don't try to Babptise a bobcat". Danny
George   Avatar
October 7, 2009 at 1:26 AM
A work of art, dear Sara. thank you for sharing. Love, Lainie
Guzzi Avatar
October 6, 2009 at 4:39 PM
very skillful diamante! Light & Love
Sheart Avatar
October 6, 2009 at 3:10 PM
Hi Sara, Please check Soup Mail hun. Later Love Patty
Fraser Avatar
October 6, 2009 at 11:32 AM
Wonderful Diamante Sara >> James
Austin Avatar
October 6, 2009 at 8:43 AM
Great description of the process. Love, daver
Docherty Avatar
October 6, 2009 at 8:20 AM
Lovely diamante through and through! Well done...Anna-Marie.
Gass Avatar
October 6, 2009 at 8:15 AM
Awesome Diamante, Sara! The form is perfect and the sentiment a powerful statement and as Patty said, inspiring! Excellent work! Love, Robin
Sheart Avatar
October 6, 2009 at 7:02 AM
Good morning Sara, Smile...Beautiful loving sentiments you pen, very inspiring hun. Keep writing! Love Light Truth Patty
Culverhouse Avatar
October 6, 2009 at 6:19 AM
nicely penned,
Kendrick Avatar
October 6, 2009 at 5:00 AM
I had a really hard time with this one. I could not find the words in the right form to use here. If there are grammatical errors forgive me for I really tried. Sara
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